When a writer wakes up up as Scootaloo's exact double, he needs to deal with his overbearing mother, who seems to prefer him this way, along with having no hands. Will he find the other writers who have become the other CMC and return to normal, or will he remain a silly filly forever?
This short story would not have been possible if it wasn't for my good friend, Pinklestia.
Many thanks for the cover art, by the amazingly talented TheGreekOwl: http://thegreekdollmaker.deviantart.com/
Here is the link to the sequel: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/173944/ecmc-sour-marshmallow
Nice story bro.
Not the feel, not the feel, AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
Hmm a compilation of three people doing a trilogy story... Interesting way of doing things
suppose is only a verb. supposed is only an adjective. It's one of those weird situations where there is no past tense verb, and no present tense adjective, so they use the past for present with adjectives, and they just say "fuck it" with regard to verbs. It's like close/closed, but only with the hard 's'. You can say "I close the door" and you can say "The door is closed," but you can't say "The door is close" without using the soft 's'. There is no "suppose" with a soft 's' though, so you can never say "The dream is suppose," only "The dream is supposed." Basically use suppose when it's a verb, and supposed when it's an adjective, and if it still comes out wrong, you can blame English for being the fucked up language it is.
Starlight totally did this on purpose. She's like "I wish I had a pony daughter instead of a son! He's so big an sonly, and not cute and accessorizable at all!" and Eris is like "'sup."
"Equestrian" needs to be capitalised. Normal ponies ARE equestrian!
A possible Dr Who ref? "I DON'T WANNA GO!"
4848492 Thank you for pointing that out, I'll have that corrected as soon as I can. And I haven't seen too much of Dr. Who so I wouldn't know if it was.
Update? Please?
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Here is the link to the sequel: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/173944/ecmc-sour-marshmallow
5857820 Thanks!
DoDo? Uhm... This is really interesting title.
The writer’s name was Chewy
What kind of a name is Chewy? Is that name were they get the saying "I love you so much I could just gopple you up?"
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Bwahaha I was reading a story "An Apple Far From the Tree" and I was complaining in the latest chapter it keep saying the four crusaders even though there is only three! Is that funny or what!
I don’t even know how to imagine a red ball
I know I promised Luna I would help you but… can't you look like a pony or something? Please?
Could I transform myself into a pony?
I've been trying for three years!
I can be quite impulsive sometimes
Is that the same as stubborn?
I was just being brave so the others didn't get scared too."
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=tVSKbDGHD_E
that I’m scared.
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Maybe it was all a second dream like in that movie.
What movie?
reddish pink mane
It's purple!!!
Thanks to THE J.A.M. for beta reading this chapter.
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As he pondered this a sudden flash of Scootaloo’s memories flooded his head.
“It won’t last long,” Chewy said in a low snicker, “You can be girly if you want, but leave me out of it from now on.”
Quick run while you still have the chance!
“I’m going to enroll you in…” Mom flipped the paper around and showed Chewy, “ballet lessons!”
Scootaloo looked at it with disgust, “NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!”
RUN!!! RUN!!! RUN!!!
"You can call me Starlight, thats the name of the unicorn pony I made up when I was eight."
Oh God!
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Scootaloo, flying is more than just how big your wings are,
seemed Scootaloo's talent
It just occurred to me there is transformation a story of each crusader now. From human to crusader.
Also that paragraph joked my memory of this even though I think I should have thought of it sooner.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ERPBIKrH7nI
She soon grew tired of the ball
then why was she acting like this?
it gets better, but please remember, you are NOT alone. Also, don't…
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Oops sorry for the spam!
Plus it was CHOCOLATE!
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I don't know why I just thought of this now.
His mother made up Starlight Glimmer?
oh that’s so funny now that there’s a unicorn pony in the show called Starlight.