Think of everything you've got, for you will still be here tomorrow....but your dreams may not
Spike thinks he has a pretty good life.
He has amazing friends, a brand new castle to live in, and the most amazing big sister anyone could ever ask for.
Spike thinks he couldn't, nor shouldn't, ask for any more.
.....So why does this weird... lady say he has nothing? And for that matter, why can no one else see her besides Spike?
Oh come on! She's just joking around! She must be lying... she has to be...
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It's not a throne for Spikey ,It's Twilights sidecar.
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"You can share my seat Spikey poo"
YES !
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This is awesome.
This is fascinating. Could use some polishing on the technical side of things, but this concept intrigues me enough to ignore that. Looking forward to more!
I am very intrigued!
I'm interested in seeing what this limbo is, where its occupant comes from, and what she wants with Spike. Lotsa mystery, that's for sure.
You may want to edit some of your tense shifts. The chapter starts out in present-tense, shifts to past-tense, them back temporarily to present-tense before continuing in past.
5324830 Wow, that's a rookie mistake. Thanks for letting me know!
Ohhh, interesting. Voices from something dead are always interesting. Sounds like a sad existence really.
You need a Slice of Life tag.
6459880 It won't stay like that for too long... the events Spike will have to undertake will not be slice of life. And don't worry, the story ain't dead for much longer
So, this seems interesting, but I can't make a decision unless I read at least 1 more chapter. So, when's that gonna be?
So... a story named after the Torture Curse involving Spike?