Phantom Haunt is the only male Alicorn which means big trouble for him, unless Lexi cam prove him wrong.
Hi i'm NJH12 and I have a accont on Deviantart it is also NJH12. And I seriously need an editor.
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entry - a record made in a log, diary or anything similarly organized
entree - the main course or main dish of a meal (US, Canada)
- a smaller dish served before the main course of a meal (UK, French Canada, Australia, New Zealand)
Also, why do you think that word needs an apostrophe in it?
Update 3/22/15- thanks to Elric of Melnipony I fix this mistake. I was told that it is entry, not entrée. My bad.
You know that 's shows possession right? They way you worded the title you make it seems like Phantom Haunt's journal entries own something, not Phantom Haunt.
*Phantom Haunt's Journal Entries
I think that's the title you were going for.
As a general bit of advice too, alicorn OC fics hardly ever go over well here, much less ones that are riddled with errors. I reccomend one of two things:
1. Get an editor and re-think what you're doing with this fic, it's been done before. Poorly. Many times.
2. Read some other fics first and consider writing something else. This has been done before.
5773103 thank you ma'am or sir. I will fix it.
Maybe you will help fix this?
5777283
Nope.
Nothing personal, but I got my own fics and stuff to worry about. There are plenty of groups to help with that though.
5777295 thanks for trying.