Twilight looked around slowly, sweeping the horizon, "Anyone know where we landed?"
Applejack offered a quick shake of the head before hollering upwards, "Hey, Dash! Come on down here!"
Rainbow soon joined them, hovering in place, "Huh, it's definitely different. I don't fly as fast, but all the control is there, and I can move clouds just like before. What's up, AJ? You try your new self out yet?"
Applejack shook her head again, "Calm down, Dash. Did ya see anything at all up there? We're a might lost."
Rainbow quickly bobbed her head and thrust a hoof eastwards, "Little town, thattaway. I could see smoke coming up from chimneys." She landed beside Spike and nudged him, "So, same for you? Are you faster or slower here?"
"About the same," replied Spike, "It seems like once you go Everglow, it sticks to you. I don't get it." He shrugged, "Not that I'm complaining."
Rainbow snorted hotly, "No fair! You're faster than me now."
Spike smiled and made a placating motion, "But I'll never be even half as cool."
Rainbow's irritation faded as she laughed and bowled Spike over in a sudden tackle, "You got that right! But you got the awesome part down pat."
Twilight rolled her eyes before pointing in the direction Rainbow had indicated, "Alright everypony, we know where we need to go."
They began to hike, with Spike, Rainbow, and Twilight choosing to not touch the ground while Applejack bore Soft Mane on her solid frame and trotted along at an easy pace.
Soft Mane gave Applejack a light pat along her mane, "I'm not an expert, but I swear we're not that far off."
As they traveled, grassland became forest swiftly. The smell of smoke began to reach them and Spike tapped his chin as he floated along, "Is that what chimney smoke is supposed to smell like?"
Twilight shook her head, "I can't... smell really."
"I got this!" exclaimed Rainbow before she took off into the sky straight up, bursting through the trees and coming back down as quickly, "It looks like one of the houses is on fire!" Without waiting for prompting, Rainbow flew ahead. Spike was after her after a moment to realize what had happened.
Those left behind were slower, with Soft Mane weighing down Applejack and Twilight's spectral form only moving so quickly. Though they put all diligence, the others would get there before them by a good measure. "We really gotta teach that gal not to rush in," grumbled Applejack.
Spike and Rainbow arrived on the scene to see a small group of ponies, most of which wielded farming implements in their jaws, fighting off bipedal hyenas with swords. "Hardly a fair fight," huffed Rainbow before charging in without hesitation. Spike zipped in just as quickly, "Be careful, Dash."
Rainbow descended on one of the hyenas, using her speed to drive a hoof into the creature's gut before it know she was there. With a quick back flip, she smashed its jaws with her back hooves, sending it sprawling, "Easy." One of its friends brought down a sword with true aim, forcing Rainbow to back away with an angry cut across her front. "Son of a... I'll get you for that!"
Lightning burst across the hyena and several others nearby as Spike joined the fray. The desperate ponies immediately began to pound the ground in a group applaud. "The dragons have come to save Arcysus again! And they brought a mighty warrior with them!" came an enthusiastic call.
'Mighty Warrior' would do, even if Spike got first billing. Grinning smugly, Rainbow launched herself at the biggest hyena she could see. It wielded a huge two handed axe, which it swung at her as she approached in warning. "Speed beats Brawn every time," she huffed, "Good thing I have both!" Before she could decide on the best way to avoid that axe, Spike barreled into the hyena. The axe came down on Spike, but couldn't find purchase on tough dragon scales.
"My main man, Spike!" she called encouragingly before diving into the brawl. She battered him with rapid strikes, bludgeoning him through the riveted leather armor he was wearing. With her crushing hooves and Spike's tearing claws, the hyena stood little chance. The fight was removed from him swiftly and he fell to the ground. What few hyenas remained broke, fleeing into the forest as fast as their furry legs could take them.
A sudden loud hissing was heard. All heads turned to see water being rained down on the burning building. Twilight and the others had arrived. Soft Mane was quite the sight, riding Applejack, who was not large enough to serve as a battle steed, while praying and conjuring the water that slowly put out the blazing house.
The ponies of the town were delighted, at least until they saw Twilight among their savior's numbers. One of them, the best dressed and officious looking, advanced, "Thank you, one and all, for your quick action." He raised a hoof to direct at Twilight, "Are you a powerful wizard, or a restless spirit?"
"Yes?" replied Twilight. "Nice to meet you. I'm Twilight Sparkle, and these are my friends." She gestured with her wings, "Soft Mane, Applejack, Spike, and Rainbow Dash."
"A, uh, pleasure to meet you all," replied the well dressed mare, "What business brings you to Arcysus, besides your timely saving of the day?"
Rainbow zipped over Twilight's head, "As if that wasn't enough reason!"
"It isn't," said Spike in a more flat tone before he looked at the well dressed mare, "We're headed for Viljatown."
The mare turned and pointed onwards, "Four days that way by hoof. There's a trade trail, well worn by wagon wheels. Follow it and you won't get lost. May the Sun Queen warm your way."
Soft Mane waved Rainbow Dash closer. Once the pegasus was in reach, soft prayer and pink light banished the cut she had received, leaving little but exposed flesh behind. "The fur will grow back."
Rainbow extended a hoof, and Soft Met it with a bump of her fist. "Thanks, kid," said Dash before she landed lightly.
The crowd had begun to disperse, returning to their former activities as the town recovered from the incident. The well dressed mare introduced herself, "I'm the mayor, Clover Hoof. I would... invite you to stay the evening, but I fear your presence will unsettle others." She bowed her head, "Not that we aren't appreciative, but dallying with the unfulfilled rarely ends well."
"Unfulfiled?" asked Twilight, "What's that?"
"You," replied Clover. "When a pony perishes with their destiny tragically left incomplete, sometimes they spurn death itself, so desperate to achieve their goals." She pointed at Twilight, "See how your brand of destiny shines so more solidly than the rest of you. Your destiny is all that anchors you."
Twilight turned her head to look at the star of her cutie mark before looking back at Clover, "Well, OK. We don't want to cause any trouble. Is it alright if we buy some food?"
Applejack looked up at Twilight, "Do they take bits?"
Twilight shook her head at Applejack, "No. Spike, you have the coins?"
Spike quickly produced a clawful of platinum coins. On spotting the valuable currency, Clover's expression brightened, "Of course you can buy supplies! Follow me." She turned and lead the group through the streets of Arcysus to a small market area. She gestured over it with a sweep of a hoof, "Please, avail yourself of our high quality goods." Fear of the ghost apparently taking second place to securing those coins quickly.
Spike trotted ahead of the group with his coins held firmly, "What do we need?"
Applejack volunteered, "Some food for a start. Ahm mighty hungry, and maybe some flasks for water?"
Twilight nodded in agreement, "Get Applejack a full survival kit. She's naked, almost literally if you don't count her ever fashionable hat."
Spike approached the first booth that looked like they had camping supplies and began chatting with the mare there, "It's for her," he said, pointing at Applejack, "A full set please."
The dark purple mare nodded her head, "She looks like she's used to heavy burdens, but let us make it easier for her." She ducked her head down and pulled out a well crafted set of saddlebags, "They distribute the weight properly, making it easier. They cost a little more, but your back will thank you!"
Applejack approached the bags and nudged them with a hoof before sniffing them, "They look alright... Tell ya what, you put mah cutie mark on these and we'll take 'em."
The mare tilted her head, clearly confused, "Cutie mark?"
Soft Mane quickly volunteered from on top of her, "Her brand of destiny."
"Ah!" said the merchant mare, "Of course. I can have that done in about fifteen minutes. What a helpful daughter you have."
Applejack's ears twitched violently, "Daughter?"
Rainbow nudged her on the side lightly, "Go with it."
When the coins were surrendered and the mare trotted a short distance to begin sewing the pattern onto the saddlebags, Soft Mane gently patted Applejack's neck, "If it makes you feel better, my mom is an earth-bound pony like you, a farmer even. She believes that a hard day's work is good for you."
Applejack smiled gently, "She sounds like a good mare. Uh, is she, you know..."
Soft Mane gave a soft hmm, "Is she what? She should be in Turves. When we get to Viljatown I'll send her a message! Maybe we'll get a chance to say hi."
Soon the saddlebags were not only complete, but filled with camping gear. The purple salesmare explained the contents, "One bedroll, a mess kit, some flint and steel, a pot, some rope, and soap." She rolled her eyes, "You'd be surprised how many travelers forget about the soap. Five days of preserved rations, mostly apple jerky and dried wheat cakes. Tough chewing, but filling." Applejack moved to snatch up a bit of jerky and the salesmare gently set a hoof in the way, "You should save that, miss." She pointed to a brightly lit building, "Why don't you get a nice hot meal before you head out?"
Twilight made a soft sigh of a noise, "I'll wait out here." The salesmare jumped in surprise, as if she hadn't noticed Twilight hovering there behind her friends. "We don't need more of that," said Twilight. "You all get something to eat, I'll be over there." She pointed a hoof at a tree outside of town, "I'm not hungry."
Spike scratched behind at his neck as he shrugged, "I'm not sure ghosts can get hungry."
Applejack softly bonked Spike on the head for his words, "Don't you worry none, Twi. We'll just get a quick nibble and be right with ya."
The group, minus Twilight, approached the lively looking Tavern. A sign hung above the door, announcing it to be the 'Swaggering Stallion'. Rainbow barely restrained her giggles as she pushed open the door for the others and waved them in. Soft Mane slid off Applejack's back as they approached the low door and trotted in. The room was well lit, with about four other ponies enjoying drinks or light meals. Two of them were at the same table, playing some kind of card game with intense focus.
Applejack took the lead, moseying up to the bar, "We'll take ah full round of vittles for everypony," She gestured back at the others. "Whateva the local special is. And ah round of cider. Ya have apple?"
The bartender, a stallion pegasus, shook his head, "Fraid not, all out. We have a great pear cider in though. Sweet and tangy, practically dances all the way down. Want a round?"
It wasn't apple, but it served the purpose. Soon the group was assembled around a table and ate well. Spike kept glancing out the window all through the meal, which he seemed to eat lifelessly.
"What's wrong?" asked Soft Mane, "Is it Twilight? We'll help her. That's why we're here."
"Yea, thanks," he said, chewing softly on the honey glazed wheat cake in his claw, "But she's all alone. She doesn't even have a book to read."
Soft Mane took his free claw in one of her hands and pulled him gently to his feet, "We'll bring back the plates in a bit!" She grabbed her own and soon Spike held his before she pulled him from the tavern. They would eat their food with Twilight in the dark. That's what friends were for.
The wrong pronoun is used to introduce the mayor. That and "well-dressed" should be hyphenated.
Also, it seems odd to point out that Applejack (and, by extension, Rainbow Dash) are naked, and then have nopony react to that. Shouldn't there be some reactions to seeing two (presumably good-looking) young adult mares wandering around sans clothing?
5661407 Fixed! Arcysus is a much smaller town than Viljatown or Kadiston, so clothing requirements are not as stringent. An unclothed mare is just a touch odd instead of scandalous. Them country folk, thinking they can get away with just fur. T'aint right, I tell ya, t'aint right.
In an attempt at revenge for their humiliating defeat, the gnolls have removed the capital letter from Spike's name.
5661475 Those fiends! The gnoll responsible has been sent to the mines.
How much was the hyenas leaders weapon and accoutrements worth? anything on the others, or were they merely disabled instead of dispatched?
How many human parties, on dealing with hyenas, would see about selling hyena pelt etc in the next town if they had a decent hunter, rouge with them? Or are hyenas just not worth the hassle, stringy meat but good quality bones and teeth?
5661549 They're gnolls(hyena men). But hawking off his shiny axe is a few gold, so there's that! Their armor is all dirtied up, used, and shaped for gnolls, making them pretty low in value.
Ghosts must be pretty common if the average pony on the street knows what motivates them and where they come from.
5661569 The stories of unfulfilled are common enough, just as the mayor said. If a pony dies without fulfilling their purpose in some tragic way, they may come back as an unfulfilled. What powers they have and their exacts are not known, but what more do you need to know?
It's going to be laughably awkward, but I would think Soft Mane would want to talk to Spike about that kiss in the last chapter. "Don't get my hopes up unless you mean it," or something to that effect.
5661575 Did they kiss? I thought it was a hug, but yes.
5661579 Hug. My mistake. Still, they have much to discuss.
Sadly, the laws of aerodynamics are a bit more stringent in Everglow. Here's hoping something less drastic than a wish can get Dash back to her usual self when she gets home, or nopony will ever hear the end of it.
In any case, the day is saved with plenty of time to go shopping afterwards. It's like these attacks attract adventurers or something.
Dash and AJ have it much easier than the other Equestrians in terms of culture shock. Not only do they have some guides, they're also out on the fringes of the nudity taboo. Still, time to suit up, girls. It's a bit of a shame that Rarity's staying home... though that's really for the best, for her mental health and Twilight's.
Twilight's nature as an unfulfilled is especially interesting. She is tied to the Material Plane by the interchangeable values of magic and friendship. Probably the best case scenario for keeping an undead creature from turning to evil. Furthermore, if anypony has a great destiny, it's her. (Not enough for a bloodline or Eldritch Heritage, but still.)
I think Dash kicked someone into the turf, because the typo was on a grassy gnoll:
I'm all for a good phoentic accent, but that seems a bit silly.
5661606 She also has good friends, which never hurts. Those gnolls really thought they could get away with such shoddy transcription, huff.
We'll be sure to get our ladies in some duds before they go off to Viljatown.
5661616 So is the clothing thing mostly the result of human contact? This town is all ponies, and they don't seem to really care. Kadiston was multicultural and they pointed and stared, but still didn't make as much of a fuss as people would for a human going around naked. Do ponies still not really care about clothes, but they wear them so as not to make their human allies uncomfortable?
5661643 I also noticed that Soft Mane wasn't shy about the ponies seeing her naked, although that might just be because she's not old enough to care yet (how old is she?).
5661643 A naked pony is unseemly, a naked human is obscene, at least in their respective societies. I blame it on the fur.
5661647 When was Soft Mane naked and parading around?
5661660 When she was hanging out with Fluttershy
5661660 She was wearing just a shirt from chapter 72 onward, and took that off at the party in chapter 75 to satisfy Fluttershy's curiosity.
5661606
Twilight got back to her usual self - in terms of abilities, not appearance - thanks to Celestia's intervention. I imagine that Celestia can do the same for Dash, leaving her with her new looks but her old speed.
5663635 The longer I use this profile picture, the more I like it.
AJ drinking pear cider. Whod'a thunk'it?
6157954 When in Rome, as they say.
I'd suggest removing the "in", or adding something before "is good for you" to connect it, like:
She believes in a hard day's work, says it's good for you."
6463522 Fixed!
I imagine it would be very bad if Twilight got hungry, as I guessing the only hunger she’d feel is a hunger for life force or souls or warmth or something else that is generally not good.
Also if they meet Dawn again he is going to be pissed at Twilight.