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In my humble opinion this was really good. And I would enjoy more stories written in this universe.
Well quite well written for a drawn out piece of erotica. Well explained and teased to the max. A great slice of private life. UVF'd
Now THAT was hot.
Glad to see this one hit the wires! I was happy to be of assistance alongside Minds Eye and ZOMG. :)
Nice romance, nice sexy times, nice little tidbits of slice of life.
Nice story!
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll be thinking about it. This is sort-but-not-really set in the same universe as my other EQG stories The Last Vacation and Striking the Right Chord. Sort of because I use a lot of the same fanon throughout, and not really because the future of this series isn't necessarily the future of TLV and StRC.
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I always feel a little uncomfortable digging into the private lives of characters I write about. I have to distance myself a bit from them, which was really hard for this one (being first person and present tense.)
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Glad you thought so
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And thanks to the both of you for helping make this story sparkle all the more.
6183473 Yes, I agree it can be difficult. My own emotion based 'gut' writing style at times messes with my own head at times. You've done an exceptional job here of conveying presence of character and a genuine feel for the situations depicted. Well done.
Damn you, cliffhangers!!!!
Best FlutterDash fic yet. If there's more of this, such as a sequel story or anything related, please let me know. Good writing, amazing attention to detail. Around two or three minor spelling errors, but it's just, like, maybe a letter missing and I'm assuming they're typos, so no judging there. In my opinion, you should try to become a novelist. It seems like something you'd be good at, given the state of this story.
Author-To-Author Rating: *****
Also, do you happen to have a co-author by the name of Barnes? Nothing important here, I just think it'd be funny, because Barnes and Noble, and books, and this is a story site
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Becoming a published author is sort of the end goal of this endeavor. Well, the whole writing fanfiction thing. Practice, of sorts. I'm glad you appreciate the characterizations of Rainbow and 'Shy together. I thought they worked well, and could work well given the right kind of interplay between them and the right circumstances.
6193092 It's not that often that I'm a fan of FlutterDash. I'm more of a PinkieDash person, because with Pinkie Pie's personality, she'll fit well with anypony, and Rainbow obviously has a soft side, so why not share it, discreetly, with Pinkie? On top of that, Rainbow's loyalty prevents her from becoming a disloyal marefriend to Pinkie.
*Fans self* I say, that was quite good!
Oh man, my favorite OTP! I'll be reading this soon!!
Awesome
Wish there was a prequel from when they lived in the dorm together