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The doom Star approaches Equestria…Can Princess luna save the world? The Star’s red light fills all with malice and leaves Luna a choice…the world or her sister.

i thank NyxKnight to help me on this and aslo this is a one-shot story

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i thank NyxKnight to help me on this and aslo this is a one-shot story

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‘You are worthy…’
‘You will give hope to many, save countless lives, but you will make a choose: your sister, or the world…’

"You are worthy…"
"You will give hope to many, save countless lives, but you will make a choose: your sister, or the world…"

6868079 ya...we need an editor :twilightsheepish:

6868079
Shouldn't that be "choice" instead of "choose":twilightsheepish:

6868079 can you be are editor plz

6868111 Sure, but I can't right now. Sorry, I have HW!

The premise is good. :twilightsmile:

A little fast paced, but good for a one-off short. :twilightsmile:

But you sorely need an editor. :twilightblush:

Where did you come up with this premise?

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