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Tower of 0


Here in my Library, I want to craft stories.

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This story is a sequel to The Pirates of Manehattan


While doing some poking about in his house, Justin finds a strange book of unknown origins inside of his attic. Bringing it to Twilight's attention and to both their curiosities.
Why is it here? Why in Justin's home? What's with the strange world it came from?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 7 )

"Justin"? And no human tag?

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That's setting off a few million warning flags. I'm skipping this.

I feel this needs an editor present before continuing. ArtichokeLust is also right about the human tag. If you have a human in your story, there has to be a human tag. If you don't get those things, you will run into a lot of issues continuing your chapters as you write on.

Bro, is this some twisted self-insert crossover abomination? Because it feels like that...

LETS SEE WHAT HAPPENS!

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
2:28_10/22/2016

Where can I find the previous story?

Clever i take it you've played "Bioshock: Infinite" and clearly our Justin is a stand-in for "Booker DeWitt" and the cloacked figure is this world's Justin or this world's "Father Comstock" clever and does our Twilight Sparkle our "Elizabeth" I look forward to finishing this story.

For those who read this story and haven't played or watched a "Let's Play" on the game "BioShock: Infinite" I'm sorry i spoiled the plot twist of the game i sadly don't know how to use the redacted function on the site let alone on my XBone

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A very interesting take, but sadly is not the case. I wrote this before actually playing Bioshock: Infinite (The entire series as a whole I love with a passion.) and really just liked the idea of a "Steampunk Equestria" That I very poorly conveyed (At least I think so, wasn't good then. Believe I've improved now.) I do appreciate you taking the time to leave comments and will always be glad hearing you enjoy my stories.

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