Morning Glory has been interested in trying to date Cardinal for quite a long time. With the help of Sweetie Belle, he makes an attempt at it.
The only problem being: Is Cardinal trying to turn him down gently, or is he just frighteningly oblivious?
I write about horses and other creatures kissing. The gayest of kissing
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Ahhhhhhh~
so cute!~
what are the Colt's Designs? :O
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I'm glad you liked it.
All I have in the way of designs is PonyTown sprites, but it's better than nothing:
Morning Glory
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Cardinal
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Too hungry to think about what the roses meant, I imagine.
1 small word... ouch
Just...
Ouch
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I hope that's a good ouch and not a bad one.
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Aww I just feel sorry for the poor bugger. Great writing! I hope you stick with this one, it definitely has my attention.
Oh jeepers, the plot thickens!
Well done on the brilliantly crafted ambiguity and realistic plot reveal. I am very jealous! Fantastic fic and I cannot wait to read more
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Thank you much for the kind words I am crying right now
I hope that the next (and probably last) chapter will be able to please.
Fantastic fic and really fun, cute little read.
Although I feel like we could have really explored the relationship with Cardinal's parents because the way you set it up it sounded like they were not too happy about his sexuality. Maybe even just Cardinal standing up to them with Morning Glory. I just feel like you've put so much effort into this wonderful fic and we've got this loose end that should be tied. In the end it is your decision but this fic really does deserve just that little bit more for a complete conclusion.
Other than that I'm really happy to have read that, consider me excited for whatever else you have up your sleeves!
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I've gotta admit, I have absolutely no idea where I was going with his parents. Even if I did, I don't really think I would have been able to fit it into what I had in mind for this story.
Maybe I'll revisit it in a future story, but that probably isn't in the cards just yet.
Also, thank you for all your kind comments on this story.