It's Rainbow Dash and Applejack's first wedding anniversary, and Rainbow's set up a whole celebration! Something can possibly go wrong!
I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.
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Amazing narration and characterization!
This was really well written. I absolutely loved some of the phrasing used!
Particularly this one:
Had me absolutely roaring in laughter. I'm sure my neighbors appreciated that.
I love this. Simple and understated, but still a touching little look into their lives that implies a lot.
Fun story! I definitely liked the emotional beats and the way you described each of the scenes.
I admit, I was a bit surprised by the ending, but I think it still fits overall. Keep up the good work!
Yup, warm and fuzzy feelings
Aside from that, it's really well-written and I enjoyed every second!
"Wait... Why am pissed again? I mean, you literally grow them. Granny just nagged you the other night for getting them, like, everywhere?"
"Giving me a reason to use my tongue well enough to make a vegan eat a wild pregnant she boar ass first?"
"Oh yeah."
You psycho, you absolute madman, you actually managed to make an acceptable pun. Bravo sir, bravo. 👏👏👏
Can I just say how much I loved this? Because I did. So, so much. I loved the way Dash was so head-over-hooves in love during the wedding, I loved that AJ was offended at being offered a chance to preen, I loved that she was super careful the first time, I loved that Rainbow owned up to her mistakes, I loved all the ridiculous puns, and... I just loved it, okay? This is one hell of a warm and fuzzy story.
A very enjoyable and well written story, loved it.
Nice! You had me worried about a feather.