Fluttershy is tending to the animals in the forest one day and comes across a puppy mill, she begins investigating after she frees the puppies and discovers something sinister is going on.
Warning: This story contains depictions of animal cruelty.
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This is a very interesting concept and a good opening. However, all of the paragraphs end with a "," rather than a "." This is a bit distracting. This is a neat story and I'm curious where it goes.
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Sorry about that, I do it in order to write dialogue, it's the best way I've found to do that so far.
Hmm... a rather unique story with a strong central idea. The execution is a bit odd, though...
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I'll admit that this isn't my best story, I had trouble brainstorming on some parts, especially at the beginning.
Hmm... do you write your stories all by yourself, or work with anyone?
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I write all of them by myself.
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I see. And are you satisfied with the results?
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Usually, yes.
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Well then, I suppose you should just continue enjoying yourself writing.
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Thanks, I hope you can find something enjoyable, too.
Interesting story. Following.