If FimFic had allowed us with extra tags: Kiwi Lollipop, Supernova Zap, and Vignette Valencia
Spike goes to summer camp at Camp Everfree, where he makes friends with five girls…and a camp counselor.
Sunshine, hot nights, and camp misadventures ensues, as Spike plans to make happy memories with his fellow campers. Though the girls may have other plans.
Hopefully Spike will avoid the same little fiasco Twilight and her friends went through during their camp trip. Unless this is meant to be some form of reboot that instead has Spike in the leading role. Almost an awkward first impression between Spike and Wallflower, but hopefully the tension sets itself at ease. Nice to see a human identity for Spike, sometimes I wonder why they couldn't give him a human form in the first place.
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A lot of us have asked that question many times.
Good opening, and it looks like Spike made his first friend with Wallflower. Nice they're roommates at camp. Didn't know they were doing co-ed. But that's good for Spike. But I can't wait to see if that'll lead to some awkward moments between them.
This seems interesting.
Curious on if the incident that happened in the 4th movie would happen here?
I get happy that he human and not a dog
Wow, i was hopping for a story of Human Spike in Everfree Forest, good luck.
Question, the CMCs will appear?
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My opinion is that there's two possible reasons of that:
1) Equestria Girls has always been about GIRLS--and even though our society has been progressing between genders and roles, its still a polarized point to make Spike a male protagonist in a predominantly female dominated 'verse. Just my opinion though.
2) is a little related to 1) because of the role, and can be because of species too. Spike is a dragon, not a pony. So far there are EQ counterparts of a lot of characters from MLP, but they are all ponies there. Spike became a dog in Sunset Shimmer's world, and there isn't another non-pony that has a EQ girls human counterparts, not even changelings that by canon can change into anything suitable for whatever universe they are in. A significant missed opportunity there, since there are canon unusual pairings (YonaBar, GallStream, even SpAbby). Again its just my opinion.
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I also am relieved Spike is human in this. I have nothing against Spike the Dog but its seem more fitting Spike is an actual human little brother to Twilight. It just work better in my opinion.
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Well the Diamond Dog trio have human counterparts. Albeit their human counterparts look more disturbing compared to everyone else.
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True, but with their exceptions I don't see any creature less wit a EQ counterpart unless they are equine...Still, nice catch Wildcard. I overlooked them.
That was sweet between Spike and Wallflower, and now Spike met more certain ladies who will be coming after him.
I can imagine one night Spike and Wallflower while having a curtain set up while they each change this kind of scene plays out from both their ends.
I can't wait to see what other kind of things Spike and those girls could get up too at camp. Looking forward to the next one
Wonderful job. Love the artwork for the girls swimwear, as well as their interactions. Especially the song from Scooby Doo. Probably my favorite one of all. And if they thought swimming during daytime was something, I wonder if any of the girls will invite Spike out late at night for skinny dipping. A forbidden camp activity.
Well interesting design but i always prefer only swim trunks, maybe Spike isnt that muscular but i think the girls could be aroused for saw him withouth shirt
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That or just leave it to the imagination?
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Sorry my english isnt perfect? Maybe i made a mistake in my writting
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you mean girls would like to see Spike shirtless?
Cool story. I always imagined Gloriosa Daisy, Juniper Montage, Wallflower Blush, Vignette Valencia, Kiwi Lollipop and Supernova Zap as friends. Am I the only one who think that they might be a great team if they became friends?
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Yes
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You’re not the only one.
Personally I hope Wallflower becomes Spikes one true love of this story. Because I feel she deserves it most.
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I hope it's Gloriosa
Wow that was really cute. Another great episode, keep the good work.
Looks like Spike couldn't handle the stories, but at least it gave him reason to wanna share a bed with Wallflower. Well done as always.
When are you gonna update???
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I'm going as fast as I can.
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Oh sorry, i wish you good luck
I thought it was neat. Spike and Kiwi are closer than ever. And he learned the pop star life isn't entirely a dream come true. I look forward to seeing more of this when you can get to it
Nice to see this continue!
Nice chapter.