Sunset think's it's deeply unfair that her human counterpart is better looking than her. On top of that, all her friends assume that she wants to date herself. They might be right about that.
"As a writer I make my own rules. If I wanna start a sentence with a full stop, I will." - Garth Marenghi
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Amazing story hope there is a sequl in the futre
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Agreed, this is the best "suncest" story I've ever seen! (and yes, I'm aware there's already a story with that name and similar plot)
This is exactly what human Sunset would be like.
This is the funniest fucking thing in the universe
It's amazing
"What kind of raging narcissist do you think I am?!"
"Uh, the same one we've known for years?"
Thank you all for the kind comments!
I'm wheezing, help
The power. The energy. Love this for her.
Apart from it being hard at points to tell who's speaking, this was great. Sunset actually met a girl able to dom her: herself.
Not a bad scenario for them to hook up. It's personally say it should be longer so really go into their process of acceptance that they have the hots for themselves, but I still like it just as it is.
"UNAVOIDABLE CHIN MOVE, UNAVOIDABLE CHIN MOVE!" That's all I could think of when reading that.
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Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll definitely take that into account in the future
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I thought it might be a little brief, the contest guidelines are under 5k, though I'll admit I spend a lot of time on the set up
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Funnily enough, I watched that for the first time a few weeks ago
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Oh, I didn't even know that. Impressive to actually set up any kind of depth to that pairing in that much space. Glad I didn't try for that contest, anything I did come up with would not come in that short. I have even more respect for this now and good luck in the contest.
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Thanks!
This was absolutely ridiculous! I especially adore the recurring theme of "I mean, it's obvious you'd be into yourself!" and the payoff(s) from it.
The two of them arguing in Latin is peak Sciset interaction. Love it.
Fun fact: Even identical twins don’t have identical fingerprints. But I can believe that parallel universe counterparts would.
All told, delightful stuff. This is the resolution to Equestria Girls Hasbro refused to give us.
I-I can’t with this story. It’s SOOOOO well done you’re definitely high on my competition list as of now.
(Thanks for submitting to the contest!)
Hahahahahaha! That was good. Someone is going on a date and going to share in the angry gamer experience for sure.
Or not, in my case, humans are icky.
And when you get down to it, passionate hugging with humans is bestiality.
Are you certain that Twilight and Fluttershy are the sane ones?
i love the story, I’m hoping for more
life is so unfair (also this isn't even true! Sci-Twi wears glasses like a NERD)
dang Rarity reading her to filth
ahaha love this slightly twisted personal growth. rereading this after No Filter is interesting
love that this is true despite them supposedly being the same person
yeah the magic shortcuts to good hair really is difficult to relate to
i mean she does have that vibe in the context of a children's TV show... not gonna hold up against the wider pool of competition
oh poor Sunset, she doesn't know what fic she's in!
not even a millisecond to think about it, love this
ahahaha
so true
love everything about this convo
huh, that is the sane half, isn't it?
ah, these convos are so great
i mean yeah if you're not into ponies they're all gonna look the same to you. think Rainbow, think!
love the Latinate word for "twilight"
love that she has become "Hot Sunset" even in Sunset's internal narration
ahaha as if it couldn't get any worse
now that's the spirit!
perfect way to find this out
love that this logical line is just followed by every character
so true nothing narcissistic about this at all
nice
the kind of relationship dynamic that can only occur in selfcest. great stuff, pushing the bounds of literature
really love this, really makes me think
gotta have this in a Sunset dating a cooler Sunset story
very nice
worth it
rereading this after No Filter and Wax Earplugs, i see some common themes and techniques and they are a delight. thank you so much for this!