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Love the picture of Shining in the cover art.
Oh, those cheeky mares!
Loved it! Worth the wait!
Well, i can totaly see Aunty Twilight being the perfect Sith Master of Shining Seducing for Flurry Heart, whom is the perfect Stih Apprentice in that craft.
Well done opening.
Well well, it looks like Shining was quite a strong Colt back in the day. Velvet is such a lucky mare to have birthed him.
Well well well my dear lil Twilly, i didn't know you were into Daddy Anal play like this. Good for you both, hehe.
A Perfect climax to a perfect lil family fuck fest orgy, too bad Flurry was on the potion. She needs to be breed too.
Well done my friend for making this one, truely epic.
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This time.
If I click that button and there's no Night Light giving one up Shining Shakes, I'll rend highly indecent acts upon your lawn flamingos
Lol nice. Anyway, here’s a couple typos I noticed.
That’s probably supposed to be an ‘it’.
Pretty sure you meant for that to be ‘Then her’.
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Fixed! Thank you.
ok I am confused about how to feel the chapter is good it's even hot but the fact that Twilight could be Shining daughter changes the shining x twi ship mean he is good with the mares, cadence, twilight, even his own mother
the more i read this the more divided I become, I'M A CHANGELING FOR CELESTIA SAKE, STUFF LIKE THIS HAPPENS ALL THE TIME IN THE HIVE
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Thank you.
It is always my goal to have my writing make you feel more than just horny.
Shining Armor is the secret stud weapon for every alicorn under a thousand years old. The sheer stupid Gordian knot absurdity of the whole thing is magnificent. I laughed out loud.
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Comedy tag added.
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How many stories out there that are basically similar to this one. That always makes me feel bad for Shining, when he is put into situations like this. They get me every single time.
ALL the mares in the family are already pregnant?? UNF.
Not personally a fan of the incest clop so I'm stopping here before it gets too much, however I couldn't stop thinking of this bit from fiw when I saw your fic on the featured page and I couldn't find a clip of it so here's it for all y'all to use
right here.
(embed won't work with clips or shorts for some reason so we're jyst linking it) (It's AJ going "That's the creepiest thing I've ever heard" right after 'It'll be ok' finishes)
(If you're wondering why I read it knowing clopcest wasn't my thing, sometimes the reactions are funny and your comedy around Shiny is pretty good in the chapter I did read)
Shining is the caretaker. He always has been.
I wonder how many Overlook that reference.
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Some of my references are just for the scholars like you to enjoy.
Me trying to wrap my head around all of the incest lore in this story:
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This family tree is going to be all kinds of fucked up lol
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This tree's gonna have knots in it.
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Question though. I mean this family is full of powerful unicorns, and was that really a fertility spell Velvet cast?
Because if so, how do we know the potion worked? In real life, both condoms and birth control pills do have a failure rate...
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It's amazing how disgusting this entire fetishist starts to look the second you introduce a character like Flurry who's resistant to the idea and is being coerced into it.
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It's amazing how ignorant you look the second you say that Flurry is resistant to the idea,
when it's obviously not the case to anyone who even bothered to read the first chapter.
But good job trying to virtue signal so hard. 👌
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I swear to god this like the book version of kanashiipanda‘s sparkle family animations and comics And I fucken love it
Good job mate and bravo.
Just wonderful! Thanks for another funny & horny romp with this family, Shakes. Just adore your take on their characterization and the Sparkle’s tangled knot of relationship dynamics.
pretty sure he didn't just ring her her g spot
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I do not really know. I am 50 - 50 on the potion working, but i am an optemist in this case, so i say that the glass is half full rather than half empty. Which means that i belive that she is pregnant.
But there is only one sure way to find out. Wait a few weeks, then have Flurry Heart sitting on the toilet with a cup of her urine that she has added a activator solution to. Waiting for her urine to turn Blue. Then have her (entier family) burst into the bathroom with her, Spike & the Royal Sisters included. With cameras in full swing, make her pose for the cameras, wheil yelling. THAT'S HER PEE!
All of this wheil Flurry just want to freaking DIE of emmbaresment.
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That's another thing I've wondered about. With a land full of magic and spells like this one, surely there is one that can detect pregnancy.
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He's making a reference to Cat's Cradle.
If you don't get the reference, you should read it.
If you get the reference, you should read it.
If you've already read it, you should read it again.
Everyone should read it.
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What do you mean? Their are no diamond dogs in this story yet (curses upon the one who thought of the their's words)
You know … Shining has an awful lot of hangups about incest … for a stallion who’s already fucking his mom and his sister/daughter…
Truly delightful incest story as only Shakes can do! Loved all the casual references to incestuous impregnations and casting doubt on who was whose daddies. Especially loved Twilight and Velvet helping — getting him ready with a BJ was great, as well as Velvet suckling Twi’s teats, and the way Twi got a taste of Flurry’s cream pie… But all throughout, it never distracted too much from the central father-daughter pairing.
Only thing I could maybe ask for would be some more explicit teasing in the earlier chapters when he was still resisting it. Some actual scene of Flurry begging for it with her body language … preferably in some situation that somehow forced the two of them into close quarters, making it so if Shining lost his self control for even a moment, he’d end up slipping inside her…
Anyway, though, great story!
The Sparkle Family isn't a Tree it's a figure 8.
I actually kinda feel bad for Night Light. I feel like he always gets the short end of the stick in fic’s. His son’s always fucking his wife, and in this one he was maybe kinda raped by his (maybe) daughter (to be fair i may have misinterpreted that one.) Oh and also his daughter and child on the way may not actually be his kid. Oh and his son who essentially cucks him is bigger then him lol. I will say though, i really like this author, this story, and all of his stories that I have read and enjoyed in the past, but i hope one day Night gets a story where he’s a bit more…. Lucky i guess? Say one where he got to the bigger one for a story or we had a story more focused around night fucking cadence or flurry? That would be chef’s kiss. Either way, good story as always!
Another banger of a story. I loved it just as much as the ones before. I this story has similar plot to your past works. Is the a direct squel to "Twilight Lights Night"?
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Wow wasn't expecting that.
Not to nitpick but what happen to end cadence had and the childern night light fathered.
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Good call. Lemme just undo that.
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Lol it's cool. I can tell it's still in the same vain as your pervious stories. A ton of similarities that could connect them. Glad I could help. Keep up the amazing work.
Side note: in the future will Shinny keep all the princess knocked up(plus is mom). And would shinny keep going for the next generation.
NVM!
This is very kafkaesque, considering your previous works.
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