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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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Being the guards officially assigned to work directly for Queen Haven may not be the most stress free job in the world, but Thunder Flap and Zoom Zephyrwing wouldn't have it any other way. They've dedicated their lives to being there for her majesty, and come rain or shine (or whatever else there might be), nothing will stop them from carrying out their duties.

Follow the two on a typical day of service, juggling many responsibilities and assignments. Whether it be managing security detail when Queen Haven pays a visit to somewhere, smuggling in Alphabittle for a "meeting" with the queen, or even just making arrangements for Zipp and Pipp's visit with their mom.

All in a day's work for Zephyr Heights' best guards. The smiles from the queen are the only payment and thanks they'll ever need.

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"Ready." Zoom nodded back as he stretched out his wings.

I think you've gotten them the wrong way round. Thunder is male, Zoom is female.

Within the confines of the royal palace of Zephyr Heights, the sun had not yet even risen up over the horizon. But the loud, consistent, and dare it be said annoying ring of an alarm clock awakened two residents who dwelt within the palace walls: Thunder Flap and Zoom Zephyrwing. Or rather, it was Zoom who was awakened. Her partner and little brother Thunder was, as usual, still trying to catch a few more precious minutes of sleep by throwing the covers of his bed over himself.

Wait what brother and sister??

Hello there. Very little I can say beyond really good job on the dialogue, characterizations, references and general wrap-up in this one-shot. Really liked this look at the "Day in the Lives" of Thunder and Zoom as they maintained watch over Haven (including such things as her relationship with Alphabittle and thoughts of assorted things that worried Haven and them) and the references to Zipp's Flight School from "Tell Your Tale" (yeah, it DOES make more sense for her to maintain the flight school for a longer period of time).

REALLY looking forward to more of your work in general.

Very nice, they need more love! you should have seen what g5 was leaked, what it caused.

now i wobder, if you could give the pipsqueaks a try

At last, after a prolonged spell of silence, Queen Haven looked up and eyed the pegasus siblings before her. "Oh, very well, let's get this over with," She cleared her throat, setting down the newspaper, and shooing Cloudpuff away. "I am planning to visit the hospital today to show my support for those who are still injuring themselves while learning to fly. Zephyrina is certainly trying her hardest, but it seems someponies are just slow learners."

Oh yeah that's right I did remember there was a story like that there is still Pegasus I still trying to learn how to fly properly but it should have been a year so they should be a little bit better

Queen Haven's sigh deepened, all the while she did not look up from her newspaper. "You seem to forget that all is well here in Zephyr Heights, and has been for over a year now. Were it possible, I would request that you both stand down and leave me to carry out my day in peace."

Well not to burst her bubbles but there is a threat out there Allura and Twitch are out there

11886816 Yup. That's what I'm going on for these two.

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Ok that's a new one on me but okay cool

I'm always down for more stories with these two.

Queen Haven lightly scoffed and waved a hoof. "You make it sound as if there are other threats out there like that nasty Opaline figure. And if there were, I'd know about it from my daughters. If they're not worried about anything, neither am I."

Uhh well the thing is yeah there is but right now she's in hiding right now

"Right this way, Mr. Blossomforth, sir," Thunder said with a knowing wink. "Her majesty has been expecting you."

Lol I figure he knows what's going on between Haven and Alphabittle

Pipp winced and groaned as she stumbled to her hooves. "Hopefully, though, we taught a certain someone who shall not be named a thing or two. And she won't come back to bother us anytime soon," She was quick to insist. "Please, don't tell Mom about any of this. She worries enough about us as it is."

The question is what was the problem they had to face

Okay I got to say this was a pretty nice story and it's always nice to see those two guards Thunder and zoom those two got the most attention ever since the new generation kind of wish we see them a little bit more but anyway as usual these two had to keep an eye on Queen Haven when she's on her royal visits or Royal duties or something like that and out of those guards those two are always with her making sure that she is safe and even with all the heart aches and everything they still do their duties and even got worried about the royal sisters which they're Okay But it's always nice that those two do anything for the Royal Family

Zoom was not about to let her brother and fellow guard get away with such behavior. Oh no. She instantly trotted over to his bed and yanked the covers off of him, shouting in his ears! "Thunder, wake up! No sleeping on the job, remember?!"

Poor Thunder :rainbowlaugh:

The sea green coated stallion reluctantly grumbled in reply. "Yes, Thunder." And he trotted away to shower and groom himself so that he would look presentable.

That’s your name, you goofy green bean

"Oh, and there's one more thing," Queen Haven continued. "I'm expecting Zipp and Pipp to drop by for a visit. It is getting close to Mare's Day, you know. Besides, I am dying to hear about how their life is going: Between Pipp's boutique, and Zipp's flight school, it seems like not a day goes by where there isn't something interesting I only hear about after the fact."

Possible error, unless this was intentional? Pipp owns a salon, not a boutique



Nice to see more stories of Thunder. He’s a cutie

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