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What would happen if Twilight refused to become an alicorn princess? After she finds out there's a terrible price about being a alicorn, Twilight gave up her wings and ready to start a normal life without Celestia. But a mysterious threat got the main six, Spike, a certain Draconequus and a mysterious unicorn from a strange new world to team up and save Equestria from doom.

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(nods) I can see the points made in your author's notes as well as the dialogue, action prologue , characterizations and future chapter set-up. And, yeah, I could see where Twilight would choose to refuse the Princess role as well as ignoring most of the stuff that was after Season Three (and the stuff that IS still in there will still be greatly modified). And it would be much more gratifying seeing Tirek beaten on pure brains and courage (which Tirek CAN'T drain).

Anyway, certainly looking forward to more of this.

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