So, I spent a while writing the draft, and I have a few goals for this.

I want this to be twenty chapters long at most, and have very, very long chapters to make up for the short length of chapters coming out. I’m also going to actually try and write something decent, so any and all feedback would be helpful on this post. This chapter is only about... a third of what is going to make up the first chapter.

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so just tell me how this is. i have yet to insert jokes into this rendition, and this is far from coming out(I got a few bonus chapters and two other chapters planned to come out before this). so if it sucks, lemme know and we won’t tall about this rough draft:

Rough draft of Chrysalis Kept Stealing the POV From Me

(Fruit’s POV)

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so, ask questions about the tagged story, or about me. i’ll answer them and this will be always open; i’ll answer your questions even if they’re a month late

so what if i made another story featuring Fruit Punch from ‘So, Funny Story’ but have it set in Equestria shortly after Nightmare Moon and Daybreaker caused the apocalypse?

Also I wanna make a couple bonus chapters where I change the point and time when Fruit came into Equestria for a fun idea of what would happen if Fruit landed directly on top of Chrysalis during the invasion or some shit.

I’m gonna be real with you, it kinda sucks, and I am kinda debating on rewriting it. Meanwhile, ‘So, Funny Story’ isn’t completely terrible by my standards. Should I try and rewrite Changed at a later date, or just delete it?