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a request · 5:28pm May 24th, 2022

I need some ideas for my next chapter of "What the Where?". My exams are over and I have a lot of free time but 0 ideas. It would help a lot. Doesn't have to be important to the plot.

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Haven't read your story yet. I didn't even know it existed, I will mark it to be read later.

I could probably come up with many ideas, not good ones but at least something.

You could probably give me some context and I can start to write some down ideas for you. Maybe they inspire you to a better idea.

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Context: chapter set during Nov/Dec. In Ponyville. Season 1. No plot.

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if that is your time period then maybe do a thing where he goes to watch the equestria founding play thing they did once, but ponyvilles own version.

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so basically a founding play but in ponyville and not canterlot, right?

Before I write the ideas, I want to say that I didn't filter them, so bad idea and probably unfitting ideas still remain.

Mabe do something with the cloning lake, I don't think it happened in season one, but maybe someone finds it before.

You could also do something Christmas or hearth's warming eve related like how the character reacts to it could be interesting since I think most of us Europeans don't know mutch about how Indians view this.

Pinky could do something interesting, maybe throw a party or break the 4th wall.

Another bad idea: Time travel. Twilight didn't lean it, yet, I think, but at least it is an idea.

Maybe introduce a new character that is knows about humans or is aware that this is a story, or even is a human. That should give some potabilities for an interesting story.

Building on the time travel idea: maybe the year resets after December. So that all is like at the beginning of the story, except that the main character remembers everything.

Maybe he meets an author, I don't know where this idea comes from, but might be interesting how he reacts I guess.


As you can see, mostly bad ideas, maybe some good ones.
I hope got at least inspired by some.

I read the first chapter, the prologue, and I noticed you wrote colo(u)rs noting wrong with that, but colour is British English and color is American English. Usually you pick one of them and don't try to mix them.

Also, if you need help writing, I would advise languagetool.org.
It finds all grammatical errors for free, so it can be useful.

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