Gyro made a warp gate that can take you anywhere in any Universe. So Scrooge McDuck, Huey, Dewey, and Louie join him when he did a dry run.
Note: Ducktales, Scrooge McDuck, Huey, Dewey, Louie and Gyro belongs to Disney
i'm a reader and a thinker. But I'm not a great writer.
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What the hell?
You just showed me the most disturbing video in my life.
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I agree!
What an awesome start! I think I am definitely gonna enjoy this crossover!
Note: It's "Pinkie Pie", not "Pinky Pie".
Uh-oh! Huey, Dewey, Louie and the Cutie Mark Crusaders are in trouble!
Keep on going!
Yep it's one of the Catchiest Theme Songs! Watch it here
Starts at 8:28!
You may want to hit your spellcheck program with a cluebat, it keeps dropping in sound-alike words...
That and Scrooge has more experience getting money and is willing to share his advice and adventures with him.
Scrooge would also teach Diamond Tiara not to disrespect, bully or make fun of "blank flanks", if you know what I mean.
Now all we need is a darkwing duck fic....
That Diamond Tiara is SUCH A BRAT!!!!!
Aha! Now Diamond's gonna get it!
Awesome work! Take that, Diamond Tiara!
Good sportsmanship, Diamond. But I still dislike you for your attitude.
Anyway, great chapter. Keep going!
So far, this animal-sitting is going good for Huey, Dewey & Louie.
I liked this story. Now yes there was some typos but who the hell really cares? Not me, so meh, typos be damned it was a good story. You deserve one of these
Ah, a treasure hunting adventure for Scrooge, his family, the Mane 6 and the CMC along with Filthy Rich! Wonderful!
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No truer words have been said.
In the end, this story needs touching up. It hits and misses on the Ducktales feel here and the misses are minor to someone who doesn't have the entirety of Ducktales on his hard drive or seen the comic series about Scrooge McDuck that has him being an equal with Theodore Roosevelt...
Get an editor who knows his/her Ducktales and this would be mind blowingly awesome.
Play the end theme!
cute simple story,
I half expect for Scrooge to try to make some kind of trade agreement with the princess
Okay, the story is kinda missing something. It feels like there should be more dialogue and descriptive language. It's a great concept, but I'm having a hard time getting sucked into the story.
In the words of Ponies in a Nutshell, "What the actual hay?"
The dialogue has gotten better. I am curious though. Why is each chapter so short?
Okay, that image of Uncle Scrooge pogo-caning Diamond Tiara was funny.
Okay, that ending was rather sudden and unexpected.
EDIT: Oh, wait. You meant Twilight's place, not Duckburg. You might want to clarify that.
Okay, this chapter definitely suffers from a lack of detail. I mean, the lack of detail wouldn't be so bad if the writing was for a picture book, but as a chapter story, it needs a whole lot of work.
I know action scenes are a pain to write, but if you skimp on the description with them, they're not going to draw your readers into the story.
I guess the CMC and the HDL are starting a beautiful friendship