In the wake of her friends' plan to curb her egotistical nature, Rainbow Dash has her life turned upside down and finds herself pulled in every direction as she is saddled with more expectations, responsibilities, problems, and some romance thing that anyone can see coming.
Too bad for her nopony asked if she wanted any of it.
I dig it.
Interesting, haven't seen one of these in a while.
I'll read it later
WHAT THE HECK
Great story don't get me wrong but, and I know we're talking about magical talking candy-colored horses, but there is not! Nor will there ever be! Anything! Like a bad luck spell!
I mean it just doesn't make sense! Bad luck is a way of saying that somebody/pony is having things happening to him/her that he/she does not want! Or did not mean to do!
Just thought I'd point that out for you
...this better not end up like all those other Alicorn RD fics! This is awesome!!
Damn Celestia...thats just evil....but effective
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Still best pony
damn thats cruel
great so far
muahahahahahahaha. awesome, evil punishment
Oh geez. Way to destroy Twilight. She deserves some of that, but damn.
damn, brutal dash, just brutal
Did she force Aurora's soul into Dash's body
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If it were THAT simple, I'd turn in my fanfiction license
My precious .....
Did they have to take it to Mordor in order to destroy it?
please tell me they didn't both hire a team of mercenaries? one team coloured Blue and the other Red?
intense, pretty good
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PRINCESS OF BRUTALITY
How long ago was this chapter posted?
Alright, I'm massively intrigued.
nice,and dafuk?
more!
Ohh, stupid secondary memories, always surfacing at the wrong times!
Hmm....Is this some kind of Assassins Creed bleeding effect here? Where memories of her ancestors are merging with Dash's memories and causing a couple breakdowns, probably induced by the spell to turn her into an alicorn.
A good story indeed, cestia manage to do the part of the worst bitch ever that favor her child over everything, including talent and skill but alright, hopefully sunbutt will need twilight expertise for something important and purple will reply:
Nope! Ask your prodigy child, she is the alicorn after all
I loved this chapter! I cannot wait for more!
enjoyed
Oooh busted. Excellent. chapter can't wait til the next.
LOOOOOOOOOOOL
hehehehehehehehehhehehehheh, brilliant and funny chapter. also a sweet one
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I agree. I am greatly disappointed by the quality of most of the alicorn RD fics
I'm loving your ideas on weather magic.
poor dash
Rainbow's heart is broken... this make me cry so bad...
Wow, Rainbow has no luck at all.
Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!! Naruto reference.
Great story! Loving how you're presenting Rainbow Dash as an Alicorn and her struggles with that, and what Celestia has done. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Had to come over and read what was the primary project that take 2 takes a back seat to. I actually enjoy both stories.
Andromeda is the show monster? Thought Celestia already had that title. You know, with the necromancy and the 'worse than murder because you're stealing an unborn foal's body for your own selfishness' thing, destroying lives and friendships, hiding the greater magics of the Pegasi and Earth Ponies, maintaining the unicorn aristocracy, ensuring that two of the tribes remained ignorant and weak back at the start, chaining someone(even if she is evil) in an eternal prison, attempting to brainwash her own child(after stealing a body for that child) by trying to seal away all the memories that painted Celestia in a poor light..
Celestia has out eviled Andromeda by several orders of magnitude by now. She even has the Earth and Pegasi ponies thanking her for keeping them as what amounts to slave races. Please tell me something absolutely horrible happens to Celestia. Even if its just Aurora Dash telling her "I hate you" as the Great White Monster lies dying.
I really hate this version of Celestia. So. Much.
Sequel? Gooooood.....
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Sequel yay I any wait
Whoa, that actually is really deep. How did they get the letter I thought it got burnt up at the beginning of the story.
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End of the last chapter Twilight asked Dash to write it gain from memory, that was what she remembered.
Nice set up for the sequel hoping to see it soon!
Wow, fun and interesting story. Kind of a sad tone to end this piece on though, isn't it? I liked the letter and the possible other explanation for why she was chosen. :)
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Magic
amazing story, considering this is your first fanfic. that's what your saying right
aww, poor celestia
MEE!!!!
Blue!Andromeda should be an interesting twist for the sequel. Waiting excitedly!