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Once Upon a Time
A group of pony friends entered the Enchanted Forest, a place filled with all the classical fairy tale characters we know...or we think so.
One day they all found themselves trapped in a place where all their happy endings were stolen and their friendships broken...our world
This is how it happened
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ONCE CROSSOVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are awesome!!!!!!!!!!
5153074 Thanks, glad your enjoying.
5153089 Actually the first try was a failed attempt of mine, this time I have a much better Idea of what I'm doing.
Yay! A Once crossover!
*reads*
Awww, it's not very good. Oh well, I'll track it anyway.
5153093
I thought your first attempt was good.
I am going to go ahead and say, good job, before reading. I feel kind of stupid to think that I would come up with an idea that no one else has. Well, congratulations on beating me to it, I will read this and probably compliment on your writing.
Finally a OUAT MLP:FIM crossover I must read this
A few mistakes I fixed, feel free to copy and paste the new description.
5155656 Thanks
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ONCE UPON A TIME CROSSOVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????
Once again,
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5153074 Oh, hey old friend! Haven't talked to you in a while!
5161068 Hey!!!!!
It certainly has been a while, hasn't it? 
cool
I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs, you should get an editor.
sorry but just trying to be truthful.
First off, you need an editor for your story; words are misspelled. ex: Rainbow Dash is two words. Second, some of your story needs to be expanded, like how did Sunset find herself in the Enchanted Forest rather than Canterlot High? (Interesting point, in Arendele they call the Enchanted Forest 'Misthaven'.) Why did Regina take her in, in both the Enchanted Forest and Storybooke? Why does Sunset get free-reign being bad to Henry? For as evil as she was, her one light is her son.
Be careful when capitalising words, colours and 'girl' don't need to be capitilised unless it's something important or a name or title. Also a question mark (?) is needed to show when something's a question. I find this interesting though so I'll keep reading
Not to critize your amazing work, but it's Rainbow Dash, not Rainbowdash
Great story.
by the way you wrote "sniw white" honest mistake
i hope to see more
Well I've read the 2 chapters available so far. This chapter seems to be based on the 2nd episode of Season 1 of ONCE Upon a Time. It's nice how the false memories the Mane 6 have in Storybrooke is almost the same way as the Humane 5 were in the first Equestria Girls. I would recommend an editor, though.
5337873 Thanks, although I'm not sure If every chapter will correlate with every Once Upon a Time Episode, for some things just wouldn't make sense for Twilight and the Mane Six to be a part of, but I will try my best.
Well, this story can't be exactly like the original. With the ponies and Spike in it now, things will happen differently than they would've if they had stayed in Equestria.
Has Regina taught Sunset Misthaven's version of magic, i.e., how she and others in the Enchanted Forest use magic? And how does Sunset even remember her true past? If she does, then Regina must hold Sunset in a close light. Either only as a Lady in Waiting or, maybe, as something like a daughter, only time will tell.
And, about Rumpelstiltskin, I would not be surprised if he already knows about the ponies. Or that they will seek him out.
5355853 For the Sunset Regina question, lets just say the "Lady in Waiting" is just a title, I would definitely believe that if Sunset revealed her magical abilities Regina she would certainly take advantage of it.
Now as for Rumple well...that question will be answered soon, but I will say this is Rumplestiliskin were talking about.
OMG LOL if only they knew how true that was.
You know what I just found out? In Real Life Maine, there actually IS a town called Friendship! I thought Friendship, Maine was just a fictional setting for Stephen King Miniseries! Well considering that fictional Storybrooke from ONCE is in Maine, this crossover was practically ASKING to be written! What a happy coincidence!
5362525 Interesting. Hmm...That something someone should consider if someone makes a ONCE re-enaceted by ponies. Fan FIc.
5351599 I love it. Once upon a time and my little pony. Twilight knows Emma Swan. But when will you get to the curse.
More please
Sunset shimmer not killing flash sentry
5398161 I can't tell if you disappointed or not.
5398368 i am happy
5398736 Oh good.
5398737 when are we get to the part of the curse being broken
5398823 At the end. This story goes through as much of Season 1 of Once as possible
5398836 I know. Where would we be in the season?
5398973 The last episode took place during the events of Desperate Souls in the present day.
5398979 soon ep 8 right
5398987 Right, but I won't do every episode per chapter. I know I'm going to skip one episode for the next chapter.
5398991 can you write more please. I love love love the story.
Good job!
The part where Rumple says 'Friendship is Magic' just makes me laugh!
Fav for sure!
So this is a story about what would happen if the mirror lead to the enchanted forest? Nice
. btw you might want to go and re-read through this story when you have some spare time, there were more grammar and spelling errors then I could count.
Some of the errors in this chapter actually made me burst out laughing, like this one: lets see if we can’t find a place to stay for the night. Yep twilight, cause you definitely don't wanna find place to stay lol
thanks for making this, this is the only once upon a time mlp crossover fic I can find, keep up the good work
btw you might wanna find an editor
I wonder if rainbow is still able to fly, but she just doesn't know it
"You know what they say about friendship."
"Uh...no." Twilight said almost in a whisper.
Mr. Gold chuckled. "It’s magic." Mr.gold and celestial and Luna made a deal without giving a fist born up. love the story I am once and brony.
Needs...new...chapter, is...screaming...right...now
My God, Rumple and Discord... Together... Shit, my dreams came true!
5155694 This story.
I watched this series ever since the beginning.
I am reading this. I am going to love it. And It better be amazing :)
5671282 I hope I can do my best. Also same here.
This chapter had me squealing like the Rumple and Discord fan that I am. Keep up the good work.
