I like it

Lero, (short for Bellerophon, for his parents had been odd folk)

And he gets to "ride" a pegasus.

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C'mon, Dash--he is male, and thereforedense.

Yes......just yes

Fuuuuaaaarrrrrkkkkkk... *Begins long process of clopping*

Great relationship building right there, I like how he made Lero being in Equestria more of a none issue. No random lightning bolt, or God sending him to Equestria. Rainbow is completely in character and Lero, in no way, feels like a self-insert OC Human. Great start to a story, the writing is top notch.

This is jut brilliant! Some people say that using omniscient narration makes things less interesting, but with you I can tell it's not going to be a problem at all. Excellent and honest writing style, I'm really excited to read the rest of this.

Oh my god! Instantly favorited!

I comend your knowledge of greek mythology sir. Bellerophon, Slayer of the Chimera and Rider of Pegasus. I like it. Most people only know of perseus as the rider of Pegasus, which is acually inaccurate. I greatly look forward to reading the rest.

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Also, I really enjoyed the level of intricate detail. Few fan fictions can put this level of detail in and hold my interest, but this is one of them.
I must read on...for science!

This is perhaps the best romance composition I have witnessed on the site thus-far. Your grammer: excellent. Your style: captivating. Your diction: impressive.

At this rate, yours may be the only human ship I actually enjoy.

wow the first chapter is so well written that I wouldn't have complained if you ended it there. Great Job

First of all:
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This... how strange. This... this is
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Why am I liking this story...?

643140 Cunning isn't he?

727085 Liar Liar... but who cares? This story makes some interesting points that I personally could REALLY take away... but that is just what worldbuilding does.

647579 Curse of being human and dominated by testosterone, though to be frank I think he managed that extremely well. I would be in pieces by now.

Faved!

Loved it

643140 ...I dont see it
What episode is your avatar from?

Admitedly thought there would be a bit longer until full pony on human contact happened given how many chapters there are, but Im not complaining.

Dash, you.... *Headdesks* Lero is male, therefore he is stupid. Lero is Male, ergo he is dense. I can see lots of wacky things happening because of jumping to conclusions...

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My avatar is from part one of the Season 2 finale. As for the story, technically, the cloppy fun doesn't start until Chapter 2.

YES Now everyone can enjoy this story. It has escaped ponibooru and can now run amok across the internet. Woo!

Holy. Shit. Wow? I mean... I can't... Which words?....

Nerfel? No, that's not it.
Skiiiblinglak? No. Vorpelwackin? Nope.
I'm sorry I just have no words for this.

ps. I got Like number 392! (Gonna sleep on this now and try to edit in the morning once I think of correct words)

EDIT: Gerbelwok and Farfulnoos. Those words will do nicely.

Lero, an improvement on Bellerophon in how it roles off the tongue, but i still dont like it... I had to read it again cuz i thought i read Leroy the first time i went over it, so i will just call him Leroy when i read Lero in this story

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Google the name, enjoy being "in" on the joke

AnonponyDASHIE is and Forever will be ... like a boss

I remember when I first discovered this fic. ALL the social rules in this fic are my headcanon forever.

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735430 there is no wrath like a woman's full scorn D:>

I soviet russia the horse rides you...
Fav'd, copied, pasted, prineted, laminated, and sent anonymously to the closest animal rights activist group with a the return address saying: SUCK ON THAT!

I made an account just to fave this

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THAT WAS INTENSE SUPER EXTRA STRENGTH CLAN BATTLE GOIN ON IN MY FREEKIN PANTS

779837 ya same could be said here

Me likes... totally reading it all tonight

Wow, that was a nice chapter.
Gotta read the rest soon.

Seriously, I've seen a dude with biceps that were at least a foot in diameter. Scared the living hell of shit right outa me.

And lo, did Bellerophon charm mighty Pegasus.

Nice little allusion there. I think I shall read more.

Bellerophon and Rainbow Dash, who just happens to be a Pegasus?

GENIUS! Hates off to you.

what is this the 3rd time reading this fic? god i cant get enough xD

In soviet Russia horse rides you!!!

i'll see my self out...

My girlfriend dumped me today, after nearly two years, so I reread this story and it put a smile back on my face. Thank You.

1265006 Oh, Nova...

*hug

Can we use "unique" instead of "unusual" when rephrasing Rainbow? Pweas?

My only complaint with this story is that I would have preferred to have watched this from the start, with this being the conclusion.
But what am I gonna do?

And the only nit I will pick is that...if Dash's tongue was that much longer than his...how could she not find his molars?

Me like

697039 I blame Percy Jackson who actually has a pegasus for a friend. (Also a great book.)

PS: Sorry for a late reply. I've just now read the first chapter.

I kinda like this.. but dufak. Is up with the dues ex machination bringing Leroy to ponyville?

Veg-eta! What does the scouter say about this story's comment level?!
*Takes off scouter*
Its over 1000!!!!

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Well that's not that bad...

That was handled exceptionally well

I wish i could think that coherently in a moment of exitement/danger...

-Watching through a pocket telescope at the edge of the Everfree-

Dear lord Almighty, they FINALLY did it. Geez, and I thought they wouldn't get the hint.

-Compresses telescope back into a disk and pockets it, pulling out a sword-

As much fun as it is spying on people and ponies from the forest, I have a salary to earn, HAVE AT THEE, SAVAGE BEASTS!

-Sword fights against a pack of Timberwolves-