This story is a sequel to His Light, Her Darkness
Sequel to His Light, Her Darkness and Transformers: Age of Extinction
As the musical showcase was about to begin, the mysterious group called 'The Dazzling' turned it into the 'Battle of the Band', along turning the band more competitive and raged at each other. It is up to Twilight and her friends to stop them but at the same time they must teamed up with Autobots and Dragon Strike Force to stop both Decepticons and Dark Terrorists who allied with the Dazzling.
Will their alliance work? Will they able to stop their enemies?
Notes: This artwork belonged to me.
Chapters (15)
Interesting
This is about as quality as most of Jussonics works.
Meaning, there's not a lot, unfortunately. It's structured just like one of his works and that's not a good thing.
Too many blatant self insert ocs, the crossover doesn't make sense, the fic itself is a word for word copy of the original movie (With, in my opinion, some of the lines ruined.), the grammar is horrid, and Egypt is not a city.
Don't get me started on the romance.
The logic in this world falls flat as well, Autobots coming to a small high school and no one bats an eye? instead they choose to glare at Sunset Shimmer? Why are the CMC involved with the Rainbooms more? It's not that bad of a detail. I'm just wondering.
Also a universe were Barack Obama co-exists with people named Azure Phoenix? Shadow Dragon? (Edgy much?)
I don't think so. This also makes the human characters from the Bay films stick out like a sore thumb, and not in a good way. (Of all the universes to choose????)
Also Egypt is not a city.
Korea, Iran, and Africa all have Presidents that have names, they weren't born with the name 'Korea President'.
Here, lemme tell ya.
There's a North and South Korea, they're both split. So for South Korea we have Park Geun-hye
And North Korea has Kim Jong-un. (I'm sorry, he's a 'supreme leader'.)
Kim Jong-un doesn't have the best reputation, don't want him in your fic?
Don't go out of your way to include Barack Obama.
Moving on, Iran's president is Hassan Rouhani, and Africa has Jacob Zuma.
Egypt is not a city.
Normally I wouldn't be too critical of the President stuff, but considering you chose to put in OUR presidents name in here? Yeah.
Why is there a need for voice actors? sure it's fun to have voicecanons but to actually put them in your story? Including the opening? Which is also copy-pasted from Rainbow rocks with a mixture of Transformers?
Instead of thinking 'Oh wow this is a neat detail' I'm instead thinking 'I'd much rather watch Rainbow rocks.'
Egypt is not a city.
Jussonic did the same thing too, and it didn't work there either.
This is the same with song sequences too.
Egypt is not a city. It is a country. You could have chosen 'Cairo' if you really wanted to, it is the Capital. Or even Mecca
I haven't even gotten past chapter 2 and I'm ranty.
And if I'm given the "It's FICTION IT DOESN'T HAVE TO MAKE SENSE" response I'm going to bite off someone's toes.
M8, no offense, but there is a LOT of mistakes in grammer and such, if you need an editor, i am avaliable
amazing
I love it but which transformers theme song is that
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Transformers Theme Song sung by Linkin Park.
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I thinks it a mix of mlp Eg songs and the transformers g1 movie remix
Gamis prime
Yeah I think so to but he added battle cry in it which comes from the fourth moive age of extinction
pinkie broke the 4 wall AGAIN!!!!
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te apoyo en eso
Y'know, Twilight cheated on Shadow Dragon with his Human counterpart.