• Member Since 16th Apr, 2013
  • offline last seen Last Sunday

sonicdash123


An autistic brony who is the owner of an OC pony named Charming Thunder and a big fan of Star Wars.

Sequels1

T

This story is a sequel to Equestria Wars Episode XII: Return of the Scourge


Danny Eclipse believed that his own brother shot his ship down and joined his dark father and became Cyber Eclipse. Many of Charming Thunder's friends and family have betrayed him as the Lunar Republic rose from the ashes and plans to find an ancient weapon called the Dark Forge. With it, darkness will spread in Equestria and Mephiles the Dark will then be reborn.


Danny's Perspective and Story

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 9 )

Daaaa Daaaa Daaaaa Da Da Da Daa Da Da

Author, you are a prime example of persistence in the face of failure.

You are getting better at writing overall, so it seems to be paying off.

"NO!" Danny shouted. "My Father would not feed information to the NLR!"

It was Dusk, not me.

In the next chapter; you should detailed the fight like this one from Star Wars Rebels.

Darth Maul could be Brutalight, Ezra could be like Starlight, Ahsoka could be like Rainbow (Since she is a duel wielder), and Kanaan can be Charming (Except for the blinding part). So the Inquisitors are the three knights. But they just don't die.

Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?

Login or register to comment