Crystal Prep Shadowbolt Sour Sweet was there when everything went down during the Friendship Games, and even helped save people from falling through the rips into the strange world of Equestria. But now she's entering that world herself as part of an exchange program. She has a new form and some odd hosts that she has to get along with.
A Manehattan couple answered a letter in the post asking for assistance with people from the other world, hoping to help the community. But now they've got a moody teenager in their home who's not even used to her hooves and wings. They've got to show her the best time possible, since they're representing their entire world. They'll need all their friends to help.
I have to admit, I've never thought about spreading news of the human world to Equestria at large. It raises the question of how ponies would react. If word of Twilight's override got out, would zoologists and wizards travel to Ponyville, eager to explore the exotic dimension on the other side of the portal? Very intriguing concept, this...
So is the story itself. This isn't going to be pleasant for anyone involved in the short run. Definitely looking forward to seeing where you'll go with this.
Does anyone else feel that the concept behind this story is just bursting with series potential?
Not a bad start, but your Sour Sweet doesn't talk or behave like like the canon one at all (bipolar).
I am looking forward to more of this story. I would also like a hint of comedy in the future but this story doesn't Need it.
Sour, your school's rival is Canterlot High and one of your classmates is Suri Polomare. I don't think you don't get to complain about the horse puns.
In any case, nice to see Sour Sweet making some fonder connections. The road trip should be especially interesting.
This is still great; I'm really enjoying your portrayal of Sour, and seeing her learn more about Equestria.
Beatles reference!!!!
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7912645 I don't think there is one. But I hadn't thought about it.
7914476 fyi there is a sour sweet tag now, mkay
Albeit appropriately cringe-worthy.