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Captain_Hairball


A Warning to Others

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Rainbow Dash has pulled a muscle in her wing. Not a big deal, until she tries to fly home on it in bad weather and nearly dies. Fluttershy saves her, carries her home, and takes care of her.

Flutterdash hurt-comfort/cuddlefic. Contains non-erotic sensuality and ponies talking about their feelings.

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Hnng, the fluff. :D

Comment posted by CAPTAIN YOSHI HD deleted Nov 19th, 2017

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This is the best comment I have ever gotten. Not even being sarcastic. :twilightsmile:

Great story.
It was a enjoyable read.

Really nice one.

Aww, that was sweet. The beginning part with the storm drew me in. This could be romance, but I prefer thinking of it as just strong friendship. I like Flutters reassuring Dash that she doesn't need to be perfect.

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I think you can read it however you want, with regards to their relationship status. :raritywink:

Very cute. I really liked knowing that Fluttershy has her animal friends spy on Rainbow to keep her safe. They make good messengers.

This is super cute. You do a really good job with their relationship, the way that they protect and care for each other, and how they bring out all this emotion in each other. You only get really mad at the things that you really care about, after all.
You really sell me on the yin-yang of their relationship and how good they are together, too. They're really enjoyable to read about together. You can get a lot of emotion across in even your shorter stories and I really admire the way you handle that and how deft you are with both their feelings and behaviors.

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