Sunset Shimmer, having recently helped the human Twilight, helped save Camp Everfree, and graduated High School, finally decides she is ready to return to Equestria and make amends with Celestia. Meanwhile, in our world, a 6 year old boy is having a very rough time. One night at the orphanage he wishes on a shooting star, trying to get a better life. This seemingly simple act manages to teleport him to a different world and maybe, get a mom he deserves.
Note: Story takes place after Legends of Everfree, but disregards all Starlight related events. This means things like Chrysalis' second atack never happened.
Chapters (4)
It is a good read I cannot wait for more
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Thanks, don't worry
Needs a bit of editing, and I mean no offense, but that last paragraph hit my pet peeve. Y'all is a contraction of "you all" and refers to more than one person. Other than that, very well done.
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Ok, fair enough, can you help me with Aj's accent then?
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Sure.
Hm... I’ll check this out later.
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Thank you
Awesome chapter looking forward to more
Uh... from the "real" world?
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Sunset is in Chs land right now and will soon go to equestria. Then, after she is used to equestrian life again, a human child from our world will be tepeported to equestria, sorry for the confusion
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Some poners such as myself don't appreciate Equestria not being referenced as real.
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Ok, one sec
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Fixed
Is this getting an update? I'm loving this story so far
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Slow uldates as main focus is my other story, bjt yes
Sunset is going to be best mom :)
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I think so too, not sure when, but update soon
Interesting beginning, if a little drawn out while rather fast-paced in certain other aspects. Anyway, my biggest complaint about the story would be the amount of random typos in there. Still, you have managed to pique my interest. I shall keep tracking
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I humbly apologize for the typos, more coming soon-ish, definatly before april though
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It is alright, just letting you know that those are there. And I’m looking forward to that!
Oh ho ho, this took a pleasantly unexpected turn.
Interesting, can't wait to see what happens next time. And please tell me there is going to be a scene in which Sunset uses her power of empathy in front of either Twilight or Celestia, I have always wanted to see their reaction to it.
I thought Sunset made up with Celestia in Forgotten Friendship.
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Set in an AU where that never happened
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Maybe...
Great work keep it up great work
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As the author's note says, more is coming, and sooner that the time between this chapter and the one before it, plan to write more tomorrow even
Great work there were a couple spelling errors that I noticed but it's great chapter
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Thanks
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You are welcome
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Spelling is due to typing on a phone with no computer access
I can’t wait to see the next chapter
Can’t wait to see the next chapter 😁
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Will be a while. Am working on it, but starting college this month
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I understand and I’ll be starting college to
Published in 2018, read by me in 2021.
No new chapters? The last chappie was almost a year ago!
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Yeah
I like the story just wondering when the next chapter will be
Will this chapter continue or no????
More
update it
interesting beginning to what seems to be an interesting storyline
Parting in such sweet sorrow what a lovely way to say goodbye to one chapter and then beginning to another in life wouldn't you agree
Woohoo boy if that were a freaking heartwarming chapter in it of itself talk about a touching moment between mother and daughter
I think I can see where this story is going oh and also I would think that sunsets element would be the element of empathy I mean if you think about it she has empathetic Powers she can see memories and read people's emotions that's an empath if ever I've heard it well aside from the memories bit but either ways