Entry for the Equestria at War 2020 contest.
Starry Night, leader of the communist resistance, prepares to overthrow Dusktalon and the Reformisten government.
There is only one lord of this story. Only one who can write it to his will. And I do not share words.
Entry for the Equestria at War 2020 contest.
Starry Night, leader of the communist resistance, prepares to overthrow Dusktalon and the Reformisten government.
I was really excited about this story. It's set in one of my favourite countries in the game, and I think it has a rich and very versatile background you can draw inspiration from.
And the story itself might be great, I don't know that yet.
But when the third paragraph is suddenly bigger than my entire monitor I realise this story probably not worth the pain reading it.
Use more enters next time please.
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I am glad you are excited about my story. It's a shame you feel that way about my style of paragraphing but I always learned that every "scene" should be a separate paragraph and the third paragraph is just a longer scene than the other ones. But to balance it out a little bit I have decided to split it up into two paragraphs.