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After the defeat of the villains Tirek, Chrysalis, and Cozy Glow, the Cutie Mark Crusaders are curious to know about the Bewitching Bell to see if they can become stronger ponies. It was only after they cast the spell they now have to deal with the first emperor of Equestria, the father of monsters, Grogar
This is more of a "what if" scenario if the Crusaders interact with Grogar so its a story just for fun.
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Well this is strange, i could of sworn that this story wasn't hear before. . .
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Well it has only been posted recently... What did you expect?
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True but what i mean is that i know i was looking though new stories a few days ago and i remember seeing both the stories that came out right before and right after this one did (thanks to their use of photo's of real flowers as covers) and i even remember wondering how two stories with similar cover styles came out right after one another. I only noticed this story today when i started scrolling back though the stories while bored and don't remember seeing this one here beforehand, its almost as if their was some type of glitch that made this story not appear for a day or two.
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Sorry! That was me revoking the story after it got approved.
I did not know what would happed after that.
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Well, well, well....
Did you think i wouldn't notice?
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Ah! Lord Grogar! I didn't think I'd see you here. This is very exciting!
I bow at your presence.
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Thank you Lord Calamity.
At least you understand the respect i deserve.
Everyone here doesn't take me seriously since the Season 9 Finally.
Damn Discord has reduced me to a joke.... But not you...
I have to say... after reading this story.... i am.....
Fascinated.
You've done an admirable job.
And I can't wait to see what happens next.
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It is I who should thank you Grogar, you have always been one of my favorite villains in My Little Pony.
Rest assured that you will always have my support!
Hmm this is an interesting take on
You know twilight should have known never leave anything super dangerous Laying around specially around kids
"This is the last spell I have given you, the ability to shrink and grow to different sizes." He looks around and spots an orange. "Try to shrink to the size of this orange." Grogar instructed the apple filly.
Wow you kind of predicted about ability that ponies can do some unknown reason 😅
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To be honest, I was watching all those Pony Life videos on youtube so I might have gotten the idea from that.
Granted, Fluttershy going giant was out of nowhere for me I guess it happens via cartoon logic. But hey, anything can happen in a world full of magical talking ponies.
I am liking this so far. I love seeing the real Grogar here.
Well at least discord is doing something after the stunt he pulled And the girls really did pretty awesome I have to admit
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Yeah, with the girl's new powers thanks to Grogar's magic, they will be capable of battling other opponents.
However Discord is going in for a real surprise...
Good chapter. There are multiple grammatical errors such as the lack of periods at the end of dialogue like this:
Also, don’t forget to add a comma between “Sorry” and “we”. Same goes for the other sentences.
That aside, good job! Excited for the next chapter!
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Thanks for pointing out those mistakes. I will go and fix them as soon as possible.
I am really trying my best at making this story really good. It really helps me out when editing this.
Wow The clones even last longer then a day lol I guess they couldn't handle it But the scene between "Scootaloo" and rainbow dash was kinda heart breaking Even though it was a clone but it was still sad to see rainbow dash feeling hurt so much 💔 But now they know they are kidnapped and now they have to figure on how are they gonna save them and stop gorgar
Well that was sweet of sweetie Belle to give a drawing to Grogar I mean even though that he is evil and wants to take over the world I hope the cmc Well figure this thing out because time's running out
Oh dear thats not good discord lost hes power again and now the cmc are now trap again now force to work for him how are they are going to get out of this situation and stop gorgar I guess we'll find next time
But it's cool that discord his best try to save the cmc And Also sweet that they helped them up And I did like how you reference the g1 ponys and the early art characters thats cool
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Since I know Grogar was a G1 MLP villain, I figured I reference some of the G1 ponies in this chapter.
EXACTLY!
Whoa dang this is not good twilight and her friends got defeated by grogar but what a battle things are very difficult now how will they defeat grogar and what the cmc going to do i guess will find out next time