3 weeks since disappearance
It had been three week since Raven disappeared and there were no traces of her anywhere. The search for her eventually stopped and life went on as normal.
Except for princess Celestia. Her work was about 5 time harder but that didn't bother her. What bothered her was the fact that her friend had disappeared, possibly abducted, and she couldn't do anything about it. She had hoped that Raven would be found eventually but that hope had died out at this point. She would never know what happened to one of her closest friends.
Right now she had finished raising the sun and was walking to the dining hall for breakfast. She was too lost in her thoughts that she didn't notice her sister join her.
"Sister, are you thinking about Raven?"
"Yes."
"You should stop. All of our attempts at finding her have failed. We can only hope that she is fine where she is."
"I know but I ca-", she was cut off as a tidal wave of magic passed over them.
"That came from the gardens!", Luna shouted as they teleported to their location.
They reappeared in the garden and quickly made their way to the location of the disturbance. They weren't very happy about what they saw. 3 royal guards who looked sick were inspecting a fallen wardrobe that had a puddle of blood under it. The side with the doors were facing the sky as if it was a coffin.
A royal guard noticed them and quickly saluted and said, "Princess, we have found your assistant."
Celestia figured it out quickly and her eyes started getting wet. She walked to the wardrobe and prepared herself for what she was going to see. She pulled open the door and looked inside. Her face turned a visible shade of green. Inside the wardrobe was Raven.
Her glasses were gone along with the left half of her face, exposing the skull underneath. Her stomach had been cut open and her insides were gone. Her left hindleg had been ripped off and her right hindleg had a bone coming through the skin. It was a sad sight.
Celestia noticed that Raven was clutching something in her hooves. he slowly picked it up with her magic and brought it close to her face for inspection. It was a note stained with blood.
She read it and cried.
Note:
"I am Raven Inkwell and I'm going to die. I had appeared in this place a few hours ago by unknown means and decided to search for an exit. I didn't find an exit but I found another note from somepony who came before me. I was warned about being too loud but it was too late. It heard me and chased me. I managed to scare it off but it came back with more numbers. As I wait for them to break through the wardrobe, I think of all the regrets I have in my life. There is nothing I can do about my situation. Nopony is here to help me, none of my friends know where I am and might never know what happened to me. What did I do to deserve this? Will I just be forgotten by the world? Will anypony ever find me? At this point I cant be sure. I just hope that nopony else ever stumbles into the backrooms ever."
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10851744
I do, too, especially if she's in Canterlot, but most show appearances and merchandise have her as an Earth pony which is so unfitting for a princess's aide.
10852256
I know.
Anyway, how do you feel about his story? Please tell so I can improve.
10852447
I liked it, although it was very short and built up to the end pretty quickly. I personally would have liked for a few more events to happen to her.
Most experience I've had with the backrooms is gameplays and people often run into a few different obstacles in the BR or sometimes even another survivor.
10852459
The other survivors would be humans tho and I wanted to do a story without humans.
I'll probably rewrite this when I am better writer.
10852465
Maybe they wouldn't necessarily have to be humans: if it's a living thing and it can move on its own, it can slip into the backrooms.
It's fine the way it is.
Hey! Raven now has a Hidden Dissectable figure!
(A man can dream...)
10854270
I will give you a Raven Inkwell jigsaw puzzle. Just ignore the red stuff and bad smell that is coming out of the pieces.
10855017
A product of Cosmos Inc.
Made for Bronies, from Ponies!
i am in your walls
11145822
Unfortunately, my walls are made out of bricks.
11146089
darn.
11146091
I'll make a hole in the wall so that we can hold hands.
11146140
based??? 😳😳😳😳
Watch for those DAMN smilers
When I tried to copy the URL link there was a text it saying "Congratulations! You have no-clipped out of reality! Now run."
Is that a joke you put in OP? Because if so then I am impressed and kinda wanna know how did you do that.
11589092
Can you post a screen shot?
11589113
Unfortunately, no. If you know how to make URL link out od a saved image then be sure to let me know. I can however, post you a link to reddit post I made about it (I specifically made it so you can see it and I didn't know where to post it so don't be surprised if it gets deleted soon)
https://www.reddit.com/r/RandomImagesOnTheNet/comments/13nls4k/dont_mind_me/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=mweb3x&utm_name=mweb3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button
Ps: I am Czech so don't mind all the gibberish contacts.
11589428
Pretty sure that is a normal feature. It is the short description of the story set by me.
11589547
Already noticed by the time you said it. A cool feature tho.