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A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)

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A filly writes her history paper about how Starlight Glimmer became Supreme Princess of Equestria, and why she admires Princess Starlight so much.


Note to Contest Judges: More than seven weeks after I posted this story to fimfiction.net, this story DID turn out to be an entry in the "A Thousand Words Contest." (I was having trouble deciding which story to put into which official contest category.) I guess the point is, stories were not added to contest folder in the order of publication.
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(Prereader thank-you in author's note.)
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Interesting premise.

Some areas were a little confusing, like how we were supposed to tell if the speaker was a past, present, or future version of themselves, but overall the basic idea was communicated, even if the nuances were harder to discern.

I don't get what happened here with Starlight and Twilight's fight across time, and how it led to this. Good story I guess?

Comment posted by Mockingbirb deleted Apr 19th, 2022
Comment posted by oneenn deleted Apr 29th, 2022

Interesting.

We don't see how she got her wings, so I guess we need to look at the youtube channel.

But, sending messages to yourself a week ago? This is Starlight's big idea? Didn't Twilight discover that trying to send a warning to your previous week just closes the timeloop and you still wind up doing the same thing?

Well. That's horrifying. :twilightoops: And I'm sure Starlight just happened to set up Glimmermail eight days after the Time War.

Fascinating glimpse at a timeline that's probably one letter away from a catastrophic paradox. Thank you for it, and best of luck in the judging.

The librarian said Ponyville is "too small a market, and mostly illiterate."

oof that is rude! and in retrospect, likely a result of Starlight having erased the importance of that small town's true history to those who were in power before her, neat!

Ever since Starlight Glimmer won, Twilight Sparkle has been really grumpy. I don't know why she's so upset. Starlight even let Twilight stay a princess, even though Twilight lost. So isn't it like they both won?

aww, a child's innocent perspective! and dang, that is quite the alt universe

A lot of those words were long ones I don't even know, but TS looked really angry when she said them.

aww, poor Twily! really sad seeing her so thoroughly defeated that all she can do is use rude words about

If I can just write my paper a hundred words at a time, and keep sending everything I've written so far to my past self using Glimmermail, I'll only have to write a little bit each sameweek instead of having to write the whole thing! It's almost like not having to write a paper at all.

ooh, that is fascinating! i'm guessing "Glimmermail" is the instrumentalization of Starlight's time-travel spell?

We have to really start writing our history paper, not just more letters about how we have to start writing it, or the envelope will get too thick.

ahaha, the perils of time-travel-permitted procrastination

My favorite princess is Princess Starlight Glimmer, because she found a way to help EVERYPONY fix their mistakes, not just her.

so true

But I heard Sunburst is still living at home with his mommy, or with Moon Dancer, which I guess is almost as bad?

oof, burn on Moon Dancer! the writer's anti-nerd bias is showing!

That's what she wants everypony to know: mistakes are ok, if you learn from them. That's why she created Glimmermail, so Equestria can learn from its mistakes, by telling our past selves not to do them.

aww, love how believable this is as a different lesson Starlight could have learned from her "mistakes"

That's why she's better than all the princesses we've had before her. Does Princess Celestia let other ponies take turns raising the sun? I don't think so! But even I can send messages to my past self, just like if I was a real Time Mage.

aww, Starlight's original impulse towards equalization of power, channeled in another way!

Wow! A note from Princess Starlight! That's another reason she's the best. All I ever got from Twilight was overdue notices.

augh, Princess Twilight being reduced to a (i presume Canterlot) librarian in her role is just perfect! the irony of it being a role that she loved, and likely had mixed feelings about leaving to become a Princess, great stuff

Princess Starlight says when Twilight heard about that idea, she was so happy she cried a whole lot. It's in all of our new history books.

so they must be true!

However, you ARE learning how to use Glimmermail effectively. I guess you'll be a big success in life.

Congratulations.

Cheerilee

haha, i'm getting the sense that Twilight is not the only one that isn't completely happy with the new order of things!


a very fun look into a "Starlight Glimmer wins" timeline from the point of view of a filly who knows nothing else but this world! always fun to try to unearth what "really" happened by critically examining the text of how the ruling Princess presents what had happened in the past! and this middle ground where Twilight is still around and a Princess but stripped of true power feels a lot more true to life than whatever grimdark Nightmare Moon-esque visions people usually write.

very fun stuff, and "Glimmermail" is a great idea to come up with for a story, if possibly not for actually using by the in-story characters. thank you for it!

Starlight told her idea to Twilight, and that's how the Time War ended.

Doctor Who fans: confusion noises in destruction of Gallifrey

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