Gather around all you fillies, colts, mares, stallions, whatever you may be. I will regale you with old tails of the country
Something is bothering Applejack. Ever since her brother Big Mac got involved with Sugar Belle, he's been missing work, going to fun places and enjoying his time with his new special somepony. Applejack thinks she is frustrated about her brother missing work, but there is more to this. Perhaps she is jealous?
Brushy Bill's got another story for you and let me tell you, Applejack Doesn't Know How To Live
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1994 was a sad year, probably the saddest of the 1990's. The world lost Roland Ratzenberger on April 30th 1994. About 24 hours later, the world has lost Ayrton Senna da Silva...
That's the only thing I can think of whenever I hear or see the number "1994"
Regardless of that, it's a good story so far
This was a cute little story. A good premise with good execution, and some cute character moments as well. My only issue might be that you had quite a few mechanical errors throughout, although nothing too distracting. All in all, it was very enjoyable. Good job!
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Thank you friend, I hope you enjoyed of the rest of the story. I am sorry 1994 was such a rough one for you.
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Well hello again friend,
I'm glad you came back to read another one of my stories. Thank you for the critiques, I do quite a bit of academic writing so these little stories are little breaks from that. That probably explain all my mechanical errors. None the less I am glad you enjoyed it! I always appreciate your comments!