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TheGJ90


Just a friendly Autistic writer who overthinks the adventures of characters. I do story commissions! Current focus: Equestria Girls. Respects G5's existence (somebrony has to!).

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Commissioned by Darkevony

Takes place during Spring Surprises! There are references to it and other stories, but, you don't have to have read them to enjoy this one!

EDIT: This is the first story in the Friendship is Worth It series, the first story I've written, that has been FEATURED! THANK YOU, EVERYBRONY, PEGASUS-SISTER, AND COOL CREATURE IN-BETWEEN! :twilightsmile:

Featured on: 3/5/2023
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After taking great pleasure in drawing up Rainboom comics that may or may not be based on their actual adventures, Sunset Shimmer decides to expand her creative horizons by writing her first fully text-based story.

Like any writer, new and old, she can't help but agonize over it.

What will the story be about? What theme will she use? What will readers think of it? How will it compare to her comics?

All of these questions and more will bounce around in her mind like Pinkie Pie fueled by All of the Sugar (TM) before she can write the first chapter...


Current Spot in the Friendship is Worth It Timeline:

The Hearth-Warmers of Canterlot High
Spring Surprises
What's in a Writer's Mind (takes place during Spring Surprises)

Series Details and Full Timeline

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Comments ( 8 )

intrigued

I found this story on a chance and thought it was amazing. Thank you for this beautiful reflective work.

It's such a wonderful homage to the art of writing and a beautiful expression of your craft. At the end of the day, all I was looking for were a few short words to hear what the writing experience meant to you. It was just an elaborate way to support the people I like since most people are remiss to accept it for their fanfiction work. But what I got instead was something that goes farther and reaches deeper. Not only with a lovely and wholesome story to accompany those thoughts, but also an underlying, powerful respect to the medium and to your peers.

I'm truly touched. Thank you, GJ. For doing my strange little request justice. Much, much love!

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Quite reflective, personally the motivations of each piece of writing should remain within oneself, but it is true that it is very satisfying for someone to speak or comment on their work. Is self esteem feeding? I won't think about it too much. In any case, writing continues and with it the consumption of the most important resource that one has in life. Time.

You can call it self esteem feeding all you want, but this is something genuinely inspirational and beautiful here. Hats off to my fellow candy-colored horse enthusiasts!

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I'm glad this tale has been inspirational to you!
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Yeah, this piece was made to be reflective, both for Sunset and for myself.
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It is always a pleasure to get your thoughts on my work!
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I'm glad you're intrigued!
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You are quite welcome!

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At least GJ definitely has the excuse of me commissioning him, haha! But I agree with Axolotl. In fact, I'd argue every form of writing is, in some way, feeding. We write in order to connect with others. To express who we are and feel good about our work and ourselves. No story exists without purpose, I strongly believe.

At that point, it's just a matter of turning feeling and thought into artful word. What separates tasteful stories with substance and careful consideration from the rest if we are all self-serving in the end?

Beyond that, I don't like the idea that it's wrong to be self-serving. Sometimes being selfish is just a natural extension of self-preservation. In some strange way we never truly teach others but find out on our own, is that it is good to be selfish every once in a while for our own sake. In the same way confidence and narcissism are said to be flipsides of a coin, so too are selfishness and selflessness.

Oh man, I didn't expect to run circles in my mind... GJ will probably know what I'm talking about there. I need to log off for a while before I start writing in poetic prose again.

But thank you both for sharing your thoughts on this!

The first thing popped into her head was, of course, her friends' thoughts on the new issue. As six of the main characters and her best pals until the heat death of two universes, they had the privilege of being able to proofread each of the issues in the Rainbooms comic series before they were released. Besides the heartfelt compliments her work would always get her from those wonderful girls, each girl would give their own thoughts on what she could do to improve her craft. Thus, they were a big help to her, especially when it came time to edit her writing. Although, she would admit, some of them were more helpful than others. For example, Applejack was always the straight shooter when it came to her thoughts on, well, anything.

Kinda sounds similar to what I've been going through with the book I'm writing. :ajsmug:

"Ya'll are spinnin' a mighty fine yarn as always, sugarcube!" , she would usually say with a tip of her Stetson before jumping head first into the critique;

sugarcube!" She*

"Um... I really liked reading your comic, Sunset!" , she exclaimed in her own way by speaking in barely above a soft whisper before adding;

Sunset!" She*

"But... um... there's a teeny-tiny... well...", she would then whimper for a bit before Angel Bunny would give her some encouragement to keep at it.

well..." she*

"I don't know what to write about..." , she internally concluded, her eyes shrunken down to pinpricks in horror. She quickly shook her head to get the terror out of her mind before declaring to herself with renewed confidence;

about..." she*

Adventure? Oh, Rainbow Dash would eat that theme for breakfast, lunch, and dinner! Of that, Sunset was certain. She was also certain that she could come up with a fun story or two that would fit the theme quite nicely, given her own experiences.

That's one of the 2 themes my book is on. :twilightsmile:

Yet... she held herself back. She wasn't going to tell that story. She wanted to and terribly at that! But, she felt in her gut that it just wasn't time yet, and she knew better than to ignore her gut's advice. But then, she realized, there was one another story she could tell instead. With a joyful smile, she began her work.

was one other story she could tell instead.*

Needless to say, the Rainbooms' hearts were warmed by Sunset's story, and it was just the first chapter!

Many have said the same when reading the first chapter of my book. :twilightblush:

Over time, Sunset would make great progress on her story. But, between school work, house chores, helping the CMCs with their crusading, practicing with the Rainbooms, and so on, it became quite a challenge for her to find the time and drive to keep writing. It would take her a month to get a couple chapters of the story written up, proof-read, and edited! Thankfully, she had the good sense to send in each edited chapter for distribution throughout the school. Not only did sending in a text-based story make the students more than a little interested in reading something new from Sunset, the chapter-by-chapter releases made them want to see how the story played out even more! She had expected that doing this would get her comments and critique from more people than just her friends.

I know the feeling. I went through that exact same thing the moment my recent semester of college started. :applejackunsure:

"Oh, come on!", Sunset yelled out frustration from within the safety of Sci-Twi's room (she was crashing at her place while her house was being renovated);

on!" Sunset*

"Oh dear Luna, that unicorn is such a sweetheart! She's so courageous and adorable all at once, I want to hug her!", she then emphasized her point by promptly hugging herself while giggling in the most adorable fashion possible, as if the little filly in her heart had come out to play for a bit. It was all her studious friend could do to hold back the urge to blush over the sight before her. After releasing herself from the wholesome display of self-love, Sunset happily continued to rant;

her!" She*

"I mean, you don't really know for sure if those girls are actually interested in redemption or not and that fascinates me.", she related excitedly. With a giggle, Sci-Twi replied while pushing her glasses up her nose;

me," she*

"Seriously?! What is the writer doing wrong that's keeping them from getting more people to speak up about their story?!", Sunset asked with loud frustration. She was about ready to shove her pal out of the way so that she could write up a glowing recommendation (and a few choice pointers) on the page herself! It was good thing she had learned the importance of using restraint from the Rainbow Laser! Sci-Twi, with a calming breath to settle her own nerves, told her simply;

story?!" Sunset*
It was a good thing*

"They care enough about their readers to respond to their comments.", she told her confidently. Sci-Twi nodded affirmatively before elaborating on Sunset's answer;

comments," she*

"My readers mean a great deal to me, because the goal behind my writing is to give folks stories they can enjoy.", she said aloud before adding calmly while her eyes remained shut;

enjoy," she*

"What do my stories mean to me?" , Sunset thought to herself via her quiet mind. It took all of three seconds for it to give her its response, one that she was happy to relate aloud;

me?" Sunset*

"I mean, I don't know what's harder to do: starting a story or finishing it!"

You'd be surprised how long it took to write my book. :trollestia:

"The rest of the piece gets easier to write as you go...", finished Sci-Twi, her understanding of Sunset's words made apparent by her smile. Before she could even blink, though, Sunset decided to express to her another part of her writing experience with a nostalgic look in her eyes;

go..." finished*
That's pretty much how it went for me in a nutshell. :raritywink:

While I almost lost track of the plot by the time Twilight had her talk with Sunset, I nevertheless enjoyed this, not only speaking as someone who enjoy fanfics like this and cause I've been working hard on making my first ever book they I hope to have published sometime this fall!!! :pinkiehappy:

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