There had been a day when Applejack almost lost everything, If it wasn't for Twilight, she probably would have.
Later that day, she felt she had everything she could have ever wanted.
So how was it that now, she was fairly sure she'd managed to throw it all away?
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Really? In the Title?
Fix yo title bro. It's spelled Beneath.
Title should be beneath. As for the short description:
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Thanks, this is why I shouldn't decide to upload at 2 am.
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Ya think?
11662021
Lesson learned not the part about writing at 2am, it's that time again and I'm still writing/ editing.
But I'm going to give it a re-read at a more social time, and make sure to catch the stupid errors. No more putting 'my' instead of 'me'.
nice
You make it sound like Twilight and Spike are dead like this. Unless I missed something, they're alive, and Applejack is just being stupid.
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A very fair point, and no, they definitely aren't.
"With tears in her eyes, Applejack finally tore herself away from the now vacant tree house. No pony or dragon called the library home now, perhaps they'd already left Equestria, and it was all her fault."
Why does this has such a bad like/downvote? Seriously! For me this story is better than more than half the stuff that actually is featured in the box.
Has a ´nice vibe´, decent grammar and overall isn´t anything like bad written
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Misspelt title, it was 1 to 8 within the first few hours .
At Least I that's what it is.
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Well I for myself gave it a upvote, for so far this was a nice read ;)
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Thanks a bunch :), also no idea why all the comments til recently have a down vote, Pinkie promise it ain't me
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There is a kind of people (don´t know how anyone evolves such boredom) that downvotes storys, comments and such just by random or because of certain words, content and characters.
Seriously, I deeply (and I mean very deeply) hate Starlight but not even I downvote Storys just because she is in them. I either never read them or ignore her existence in the story.
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The story title was originally misspelled, so that probably didn't help. Who knows now though.
The last chapter is sitting on 4k words, with one section missing, I think I'm going to go for 4 chapters after all.
Why didn't I consider looking for the manuscript for the episodes instead of watching them on youtube.
But please don't advertise msbi courses on people's stories.
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Nobody fucking cares, spammbott.
That was a good chapter.
Nice going Applejack. This is how you doom Equestria. Push Twilight away because you think you know better. Tirek wins easily now.
So who the hay actually went to New Mareland? Or did anypony go at all since Twilight is still here? I also recognize that country name from Equestria At War, but that's all I know about it. Hopefully it's just the country and not the whole EAW setting.
I like using EaW's map, but definitly not that universe in this fic, if I use the universe i'll include the tag.
As for who's in New Mareland? Thats a problem for future Celestia to deal with, she'll probably throw Twi ... I mean Luna at it.
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Oh that'll be a fun conversation once Celestia realizes what Twilight did 😁.
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Dude. Why haven't you deleted that spambot comment? And also, learn how to properly reply to comments. Nobody sees your reply as it is unless they come back to the story.