Going to the annual fair was supposed to be a reward for her class and teachers, but when a sneaky pegusus filly breaks free from custody its anything but a relaxing trip.
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No comments yet, I see. Well, Cozy isn't the kind of character that is universally loved, so I am not surprised. I think that the pink pegasus filly is just too darn cute in her devious way, and part of that is her inability to swear like a sailor on leave. I mean, golly gee!
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Yeah, she's a cute character. Though I'm not surprised she doesn't get too much love. She was shafted pretty hard in the show and why she does what she does is never made clear and she's never given a chance to redeem herself. I think if those two would have happened she would have more of a following. Truth be told I don't exactly have a fondness for her myself but the person commissioning the story really enjoys them. And its been fun to write so that's good ^^
11716478 i wondered if they will reform cozy by showing her what she needed all along and that is the only way to beat cozy once and for all or maybe they can use the amulet to turn her into a baby so tell me what you think by the way love the story so far
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Glad you enjoy the story always makes me happy to to hear someone is enjoying a story I write. As for your idea ig you'll have to wait and see what happens >:). The commissioner has the entire thing plotted out, they usually pay for a part to be done about once a month. But part 3 is done, but with me posting on other sites for other fandoms and part 3 isn't due to be posted for like a month on there, but on my Patreon this Friday. So I'm in an awkward spot of posting it here before anyone else gets to see it before the people on DA and fanfic, and people on Patreon kind if getting ripped off. So... please be patient for the next part :)
11717139 okay thanks
Oh, please fix your misspellings! Last I heard, Yuna is a summoner, not a yak. Yona is a yak, but even then, you still misspelled her name again as Yone. Ugh! I can barely read this fic from all of the spelling mistakes!
I like a good Cozy story, as she needs lots of love as a character, but please redo your mistakes and PROOF-READ! I am dropping this from further reading until you clean up your story.
So Flurry Heart turned Cozy Glow into a infant like how she did to her enemies. What will they do with an infant Cozy Glow who has her original mind whose smart enough to remember this humiliation?
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The commissioner has one more bonus part to add to the story, so whenever they feel like commissioning the last part I'll get out for everyone to see lol