Anon gets turned into a colt that has no home and no friends or family, but he is happy. The reason he is happy he could do anything he please. And also he could make friends on the way. He could get stronger who knows?
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Finally a story where anon is turned into a pony with the anatomy he is used to.
This is great! I can't wait to read more this.
lol
This just goes to show, don't meet your heros.
Interesting so far, writing flow still need some work, at least you you seem to know where to put your punctuations. You might want to use a Text to speech program like Balabolka(yes it's free), to help review your own writing. Seeing it's Annon as the protagonist I am assuming he will get into a lot of comical and confusion situations with Ponyvillians to give any local adults have massive headache worst then the CMC. What tribe is he? I am assuming he is a green hearth pony. I wonder who will be his guardian, of does having a cutie mark makes his already considered an adult and is eligible to live on his own and take an aprentiship?
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Thanks for the advice
The grammar is pretty rough, but I like the story so far.
Two weeks has passed by? Wow. I did not realize this. Guy must have had a real rough go of it.
Moar plez
Bro got knocked out what? 3 times? New record.
Ohh...
I think one or two areas need some minor adjustments with sentence structure. But overall nice to see another chapter.
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Ohh what?
Thank you for the post. Good luck with your finals.
Looks like the big event is resolved. Now we get some aftermath.
Lots of ponies died, huh? That sucks. Will they be remembered? I always suspected that those early background ponies who looked like they were just copies weren’t actually copies or animation errors. I think they were related -because there’s only so many color combinations- but slowly dwindled from the hijinks. Does Pinkie do somber memorial parties?
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Lucky it was in Anons dream and not in real life