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Doctor Perseus


I'm just a guy who loves to write.

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This story is a sequel to Doctor Whooves Episode 2: The Awakening


The TARDIS takes the Doctor and Twilight to the planet of Eugora in the year 1899. Here they come across a group of pony soldiers, explorers, and scientists. However, the forests of Eugora hide dark secrets and the Doctor, Twilight, and others find themselves facing off against two deadly enemies, and the Doctor knows one of them.

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(Joke) Alt. Title: Doctor Who Cares? Episode 3: Episode 2 Isn't Among Us

1948601
Episode 2 should be approved soon. I submitted episodes 2 and 3 at the same time but episode 3 got approved before episode 2 for some reason.

I don't know what the three people that down voted this story were thinking, because this is honestly among the This is honestly the best Fanfiction I have ever read. Is your real name Steven Moffat? :raritywink:

"This body is nice," he said to himself in a wheezily voice. "So many happy memories and a somewhat high intelligence. Yes. I say Mr. Davis is going to prove himself to be quite useful in the big picture."

Sounds like Talerian talk, read the book apollo 23 and you'll see what I mean.

kkk 3 things
- you said they shook hands but u must mean hooves :pinkiesad2:
-this story is aweeessssooome :pinkiehappy:
- EWWWWWWWWW :applecry: giant spider

wait but i thought that the fourth doctor decided not to exterminate the entire dalek race?

Oh so that's what happened.

Anyway... WEEPING ANGEL!!!

Cue theme

But cliffhangers are what make a series of stories so exciting! They make you lust for more!

Is that like you're personal motto? :raritywink:

Second time I'm reading this story, and I just realized Colonel James is an alicorn. A lot of alicorns in the future.

This is the first time one of these stories got really dark. Decapitated pony! :pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy:

Well certainly it's appropriate that a story this dark would involve Weeping Angels, probably the darkest of Doctor Who villain creatures.
Whatever you do, don't blink! :twilightoops:

I mean don't take your eyes off of it. Don't look away. Don't blink. Just keep your eyes on the statue if you see it.

Weeping angel!

Another thing I didn't notice until reading this a second time: Jean Locke... Jean. Locke. :rainbowderp:

2588188 I'll assume that's true. But the Ninth Doctor came to be as a result of the Time War and the extermination of the Daleks.

Twilight began to panic.

I began to panic! What is it about Weeping Angels that freaks me out!? :pinkiecrazy:

2086297 I appreciate your enthusiasm, but I have read better fan fictions than this. :pinkiesad2: But one of them was also written by our good ole' Doc Perseus here.

Having read this a second time, I realize this story has a very good ending. Kind of goes to the heart of who the Doctor is and what Doctor Who is all about.

I also really like the balance struck so far between Doctor Who villains (the Dalek, the Weeping Angel) and MLP inspired Doctor Who-esque villains (Thalia, the Eugoran spider-crab thing). It shows how these two very different worlds have blended into their own unique crossover world.

Another thing I realized in my re-reading, Donna gets mentioned a lot in these episodes. Foreshadowing.
I should re-read things more often.

"No hints or sneak peeks?"

Sorry, spoilers. :rainbowlaugh:

One thing though, it kind of annoyed me a bit that some of the secondary characters weren't described in full, but I could fill it in in my head.

2907454 That comment is really old. My new fave fic is either A Pony Walks Into A Bar or The Keepers of Discord. The best fanfic ever is arguably My Little Dashie, though. It takes A LOT to make me cry like that.

ok that makes sense why 3 is before 2, lol it took me a while to find 3

2907424 the fact that they are statues that are just that until you look away, then proceed to try to kill you by sending you back in time.

2907484 have you read the unexpected love life of dusk shine? it a pretfy good one. and surprisingly, no clop related stuff in it -beacause of how the name sounds-. or how about my little caboose:blue is magic?

2907421
yup that was entirely skipped over :facehoof:

2912653
or just snapping your neck
they do that if they dont need your PE

1965409
FOOL!! Anything that holds the image of an Angel becomes itself, an Angel!:applecry:
YOU"VE DOOMED US ALL!!:flutterrage:
:derpytongue2::rainbowwild::pinkiecrazy:

3768567
*claps slowly* bravo genius
yep we're all goin 'n die

2912653
and in your head your like "What?! Statues don't move!" and its scary and confusing

mmmm dan dan dann :heart::heart::heart::heart::fluttershysad::fluttercry:

dam sound pind by a angel :heart::heart::heart::heart::fluttershysad::fluttercry:

i see a lot of time wimpy thing hear :heart::heart::heart::heart::fluttershysad::fluttercry:

i see you at point B yet i say hi at point E he he :heart::heart::heart::heart::fluttershysad::fluttercry:

Oh Celestia...And Luna..And all of the other alicorns in this story...
A freaking corpse-stealing spider...
...And a Weeping Angel/Pegasus.
WE'RE ALL DEAD, I TELL YOU! DEAD! :raritydespair::raritycry:
:rainbowlaugh:

Twilight's attack mode for spider in 3.. 2.. 1... ( Read episode 2! )

Could you make this into an animated cartoon on youtube?:pinkiesad2:

Ships created and used by the Time Lords.

That's who built the TARDIS

TARDIS's are grown not built

2588188 the war doctor killed them (war doctor is in between 8 and 9) it was all in day of the doctor

"Well at least it's nice to see that the odds are in my favor."

Since when we're they in the Hunger Games?

"Yes. You, the Colonel, my assistant, and even I could be the creature."
"So what do we do?" asked Vincent.
"We stay in this room until we are able to weed the puppeteer out of its puppet."
Everypony slowly backed away from each other, their eyes refusing to look away from their possible enemies.

:pinkiehappy:*squee*

SHIT HAS HIT THE FAN! REPEAT! SJIT HAS HIT THE FAN!

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Understatement right there. Cover blown, body-hopping spider, and weeping angels.

Bloody Weeping Angels. Couldn't just leave us alone, could you? Ah well, more action for us.

"Guess this would be a good time to try that unlocking spell," she breathed.

Alohomora!

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