Aug
3rd
2023
I have a narrative-based story on the EQG version of King Sombra · 10:20pm Aug 3rd, 2023
And I haven't taken the time to upload it. Mostly because it's in narrative form, and I wasn't sure if anyone would like that. Still, you should all know what the story is: it's basically the equivalent of Fiendship is Magic, and the story of Dr. Doom. This was several years ago, and I honestly thought that King Sombra would work as the series equivalent of Dr. Doom: especially when he learns to wield dark magic, and combine science with sorcery for his purposes. And how all of his anger, and
Hey! I would appreciate it if I could get some professional feedback on my masterpiece!
- MLP: FiM
- Comedy
- Drama
- Slice of Life
Follow the journey of a little girl who takes her football to the next level!Just randomly self-promoting my work to get the story out there. Feel free to look at my other stories such as You’ll Never Walk Alone and A Sweet Tooth if you prefer something darker.
Thank you for reading friend!
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You're quite welcome. I'm eager to see where the story leads to.:)
Thanks for favoring Spike's Kingdom.
So I guess rumble is adopted? Or is he really bertuccio's stepson??¿ . I remember Jacopo being in the book a few times. (In the original novel benedetto is Bertuccio's adopted son not stepson. He's basically a foundling because his birth father stuffed him in a box for being born illegitimate and Bertuccio stole the box thinking it had money or jewelry inside. Instead he found a baby and raised him as his own child). Like mlp and Count of Monte Cristo. Was wondering what inspired the changes? Is Caderousse single in your version or still married to a combination of lady Macbeth and Madame tenardier from les misarables. (All three woman are the boss in the relationship and the husband is the dumb sidekick that just goes along with whatever they say even if they don't want to. )