Yep, this is the story that I'm currently working on. Had a break from planning it to knock together the cover art. 
So, the final chapters of Marking the Generations have gone up today. 
What are your thoughts?
Was it a good idea to split it into 4 parts or should it have been one monster story?
Did you enjoy this alternative take on the latter parts of Make your Mark?
So, part four is up to Seventeen chapters. At the moment, it's looking like there will be Twenty One in total.
That means we're getting closer and closer towards the end of the story. 
In the final part of this four part series, Equestria is under attack! With Opaline stealing everypony's cutie marks, will her long awaited release from her castle prison comes to pass?
Can our heroes defeat her for good or will it take more than the combined efforts of six individual ponies to do so?
Having improved my proof reading throughout the writing of Part Two and into Part Three of Marking the Generations. I've now gone back to Part One and given it some more love. 
So, the final chapters of Marking the Generations have gone up today.
What are your thoughts?
Was it a good idea to split it into 4 parts or should it have been one monster story?
Did you enjoy this alternative take on the latter parts of Make your Mark?
Are there any parts I should have done differently?
All feedback welcome 
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