Once a writer, but now gone. You might see him again one day, though...
Applebloom has been killed and Silph could do nothing about it, and Big Macintosh is a mess because of it. However, that could change when Silph travels to Equestria to try to fix everything.
Meanwhile, two seemingly unrelated ponies sense something isn't right in the town. Somepony is here who isn't supposed to be here, and they're probably just as angry as Big Mac is.
(Told from the First-Pony view of differing characters.)
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No... just...
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No...
>the skinnymans
Because that totally hasn't been run into the ground by every thirteen-year old on the internet.
I don't really like the plot/story but if you want to keep going by all means!
(And ignore the negative comments, have faith in yourself and you're writing.)
P.S: If this is you're first story then try sticking to third person, I heard it is easier.
Gawd
Not another Slender fic
You should mention the story before this in the description, and provide a link.
*Looks at cover pic*
BULLSHIT!
thats realy cool slenderman is definately a alicorn
2616015 Half-Slender OC
Also... yeah, I guess ponies are going to think that. 
)
Buck you.
2615999 I guess I could fix that.
2615509 Not my first story. I have several others. (Not all of them are that good, I'll admit.
2615409 Again, semi-original plot extension that nopony is going to see when they first scroll over the fic.
2615359
2616343 Again, half-Slender oc.
Bro, if you're going to write a slender story, you can't just make it like any story. What makes the Slender mythos so creepy and unsettling, is that there's always this air of terror and dread. I suggest you watch Marble Hornets, Everymanhybrid, and Tribe Twelve. Trust me, I've written Slendy before, It takes a kind of formula, you can't write it like some other HiE story, it has to have an unsettling prose.
2616352 Good luck getting other authors to like you.
2619080
I like your profile picture
2620604 Thanks.
Slenderman remade with the Pony Creator? youhavegottobekiddingme.jpeg
2624262 Again, half-Slender OC
As for everypony else, you will not discourage me. I will continue to write this weather ponies like it or not!
2630466 It's alright, I'm not discouraging. If anything, keep at making stories until you get better at it. After all, practice makes perfect.
Also, what 2616662 said.
And remember... faithfulness makes success. Right?
Right?
2630466 Not trying to discourage you bro, how about instead of getting pissed off, you actually read some of the advice people have posted.
2631360 I am.
2631266 Thanks.
2633044 No, you obviously aren't. If you were, you wouldn't be telling people to fuck off and that you'll do things your way, which you did say that.
<---- This right here, is telling people to fuck off, and that you consider their comments nothing more than discouragement.
<---- And this right here, is saying that you don't care what we believe to be good, you're just going to do it your way.
Take my advice kid. Read the popular Slender fics on here, and you'll see. In case you don't know how, here's an easy tutorial.
1. Go to the very top, and click "browse".
2. Next, you'll see a small search bar underneath your task bar. (The task bar displays your favorite, your account, ect.)
3. Type "Slender" into the search bar, and open the drop down menu labeled, "Order".
4. Select rating.
5. Click the filter button.
6. Read.
7. ???
8. Profit.
2633227 I apologize for my previous comment, but I was in a rush, then. (I still am, now.)
Anyway, I'll try that when I get a chance. Thanks.
I lol at you dislike bar
, but really, you should probably fix that
2666096 Yes, lol at my dislike bar for now. I still have plenty of other stories that actually have like bars.
2666101I'm glad, and if you're attempting an insult, I also have high like:dislike ratio on all of my stories, but that's if you're being insulting
2666105 No insult intended. I apologize.
Oh please don't cry, Fluttershy. Anyway, sorry you thought I was insulting you.
2666119No, it's okay, you just can never be sure
2666122 I'm going to end this conversation and watch Tomodachi wa Mahou, now. Tomodachi wa Mahou Episode 8 sub See ya.
I feel like I should say something down here but I'm afraid of doing so.
2666142 You should check the German dub, too
2717890 I just might. You know, after I've finished watching Code Lyoko Evolution.
2717903 Do it! German Pinkie is good
O my god.
WORST FANFIC I HAVE READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!
That's not Slender. That's a black and white alicorn!
2616356
WHAT FUCK DOES THAT MEAN
2731945 For the love of Celestia... IT IS THE SECOND IN A TRILOGY!
2732107 I have no idea what you are talking about.
You do understand there is only one Slender Man...do you not? It's not an entire race of...Slender...
2809915 First off, this fic is cancelled. Stop hating, already. Second, if there's only one Slenderman, then how do you explain creatures like Slendermane?
2817856
There are none...Slendermane is a ponification of Slenderman...
2939046 Dude, I canceled this fic so I don't have to put up with crap like what you're giving me right now.
2940485
Just saying :3
2948735 Thank you. Now stop saying.
Please please pleeeeezzzeee coontinue is will love you 4eva
3639534 Well... if you want it that badly... Oh alright. Just take down the crying Fluttershy emoticons and I'll post another chapter.
This was just awful. What in the hell drove you to write this?
3643612 I have no idea, okay? I knew continuing was a horrible idea. 3639534 Curse you and your sad Fluttershies.
Well this is sad to see. a good person giving up on a story that he likes to make.
Sure alot hates it but look at its score and think, some of the downs may be caused by seeing that its on cancel. I love this kind of story and you like writing so keep writing till you are out of ideas.
Keep working mate and i think some of those dislikes turns into likes.
Thats all from here.
3992890 You do give me an idea. The first several chapters are rubbish and the ones I've written afterwards are the same, but if I were to reboot this series with entire rewrites of these same chapters, I just might be able to make it work again. Thank you. You have no idea how much this has helped me.
And a hug.
Youre welcome agent_cupcakes.