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This story is a sequel to The Adventures of Batsy Fluffentuft the Magnificent
Batsy Fluffentuft makes her daring escape. A certain street performer catches her eye. Possibly the only pony in Equestria with an ego to rival her own...
Naturally, a contest is in order. Will Batsy's ego survive?
Probably not.
"Sex" tag for dirty humour. Just to be safe.
Written for ocalhoun's 250k contest!
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I like it. Very Batsy.
but the other stories not even complete
It's not the same as when the original author wrote it, but I'll take it!
Magnificent batsy!
So... near the start she steps out of her boots and flies down the hallway away from her annoyed guard partner.
Then in the next paragraph she steps out of her boots and tiptoes down the hallway away from her annoyed partner.
... Did I miss something?
6942046 No. I messed up. Thanks for catching that!
I would agree that Batsy was best bat pony, I really would, but there's one problem; she looks EXACTLY like every other bat pony mare on the damn internet. So to say she was best bat pony, would be pointless because...which one is she?
So I'm afraid I can't agree that she's best bat pony. Sorry. I will when I know which one she is though.
6942046 She heard you liked boots, so she put her boots in some boots just for you.
6942472 Is Batsy going to ask that stallion from the original story to do her to win the challenge, and if so is it going to turn into a clopfic? Because I'm hoping the answer to my question is 'No'.
6942731 No. I don't do clop.
I think everypony present is going to kill Batsy with tomatoes.
Also, Batsy is literally Echo but with a better personality. The cover art is something I found by googling "Echo pony".
6943957 How can you say a better personality? I have no idea who Echo is, and for all I know it could just be another name for a bat pony someone copied off the internet.
Because, and I'm not trying to be rude here, almost - I repeat, ALMOST - every story cover art and drawing of bat pony mares are nearly the exact same bat pony mares.
It's like one person made the first original design and suddenly every brony and pegasister suddenly wanted it so they could put their own names and personalities to it.
It's just really weird the more I see it pop up. It doesn't make your story bad, nor the original story bad either. But it just seems...how do I say this without coming off as rude...it seems...lazy, really.
But that's just me. It's my opinion, and even then it's only a small nitpick. I don't mean to sound rude or horrible, but Batsy just looks generic. You say she has a better personality, but all I see is a bat pony that looks like a thousand other bat ponies. I mean, if the hairstyle at the very least was different that'd be something original.
But like I said, it's just a nitpick, nothing more. And I really hope you don't take offense to my criticisms. The story itself is okay. It's just that pic that doesn't make me feel like this story is about Batsy, but some other bat pony who got renamed Batsy.
6944008 Neh. I didn't pick the original cover art. Blame ocalhoun.
6944111 As would a hundred thousand other people.
I've made my point, that's all. Just get out of here and start writing that next chapter, you hear me? XD I wanna see more.
6944165 This story is complete, because contest regulations and stuff. I realized I accidentally labelled it incomplete and this mistake has been corrected.
Sorry.
6944239 Wow...
That sucks major hard.
And with that I've kinda lost all interest in the story now. Sorry man.
And how does a 250K Contest even work? What's the 250k supposed to mean!?!
6944301 The 250k is the number of readers he/she's had. So there's a contest. For reasons.
6944309 Wow.
Now THAT'S an egomaniac if I ever heard of one.
I'd ship it.
Also, I have a mild feeling that Batsy is only in the guard as a mascot, and noone takes her actually seriously. Otherwise Luna must have quite the stock of painkillers for her headache:D
Sequel!!!!! Plus my OC thinks Batsy is soooo hot!!!
6944008
Midnight Blossom, Sunshine Smiles and Frolicsome Meadowlark were around long before Echo appeared on 4chan.
6946502 WHO THE HELL IS ECHO!?! WHO THE HELL IS ECHO!?! WILL SOMEONE PLEASE JUST ANSWER ME; WHO! IS! BLOODY! ECHO!!!
6946658 vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/gyropedia/images/c/c9/FANMADE_Bat_pony.png/revision/latest?cb=20131005030942
This is Echo. She's a thing. I dunno much more.
6947230 So that is Echo...
I'm...I'm not impressed at all. I'm sorry. I just...oh, my head hurts so badly from all of this.
6947325 Well, you don't have to stay.
Echo was just a simple recolor of Midnight Blossom, which is interesting since Equestria Prevails participated in the /mlp/ thread that spawned Echo. Surely he could have come up with a wholly original design.
http://equestria-prevails.deviantart.com/art/The-Shadow-309824159
6947350 I know. But people keep commenting and I don't want to be rude.
Oh, and you're not the problem, it's just...me.
6947361 God damn it, bat ponies just don't get a break in the originality department, do they?
I rather like Grey Mouse.
http://pastebin.com/tQcs1NLs (nsfw)
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6944239 Doesn't that actually make it less consistent with the original?
6947505 Pfft, screw consistency. Who needs consistency when you have Batsy Fluffentuft?
6946502 Goddamit Smiles
I recognise two of those from Diaries of a madman though im not even sure theyre exclusive to that (i mean ive only seen Smiles in diaries) where did meadowlark originate from ive not heard that name before?
6947991
Moonstuck by Egophiliac.
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https://derpicdn.net/img/2012/11/6/144364/tall.png
They appeared on the same day Batponies were introduced in the show in Luna Eclipsed.
6948051 My god its been ages since ive seen that comic i completely forgot about it, thanks for the reminder XD
Sequel to an imcomplete story that hasn't been updated in a while
HOW in the world did BATSY get to be a GUARD
6950218 She's a batpony. That's basically the only reason.
Hey, the recruiters thought it was a good idea!
6950218
It's a curse, Batsy is really what's left of Twilight Sparkle after she cured Flutterbat and Timberjack. Luna is the only one who took pity on her.
6952026 I reject your head canon lacking other proof and not sure I want to substitute my own as it seems that might lead to more insanity on my part
6952047
Okay, okay. Batsy is really Spike after he was exposed to poison joak... and the reason Batsy is in the royal guard is because she really wants to be a princess. And, she's staging a Coup.
6952062 I'll accept the last two as entirely possible not that she is likely to succeed unless Luna or Celestia think it would be a good joke. Though like Pinky and Brain she is unlikely to stop trying
6952102 Princess Batsy Fluffentuft. I like where this is going.
We need more Bat!
Good story!!
By the way: Who did win the contest?
If Batsy and Trixie have lesbian sex with each other, does it result in a simultaneous loss or victory?
That ending though... Lel
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6956587
Eventually, they tied. Then Batsy ate Trixie. So she sort of won.
6962363 Quick question, why does this have a complete tag? That line at the end is begging for you to do a second chapter.
6983763 Because I'm a jerk.
6983771
I like and dislike so so much right now. Like you for creating Batsy Fluffentuft, dislike you for pulling crap like this.
6983777 I didn't create Batsy Fluffentuft. I created this particular rendition of her fabulousness. This is complete due to contest rules. Maybe, I 'll change it when the contest is over.