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steel soul


Gonna work on that Kingdom Hearts fic at some point

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It all started with a flash, strange beings appearing from out of nowhere. No pony knew where they come from but the pain and anguish wreaked upon them told them that they had been through enough of an ordeal to not refuse their need for help.

Let’s just hope that they had made the right decision.

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but the pain and anguish wrecked upon them

i think you might mean wreaked.

wreak
[reek]
verb (used with object)
1.
to inflict or execute (punishment, vengeance, etc.):
They wreaked havoc on the enemy.
2.
to carry out the promptings of (one's rage, ill humor, will, desire, etc.), as on a victim or object:
He wreaked his anger on the office staff.

JMP

Interesting story so far. Not sure what all those headsets and soldiers are, but I imagine these are different circumstances from the normal Sonic games. I'll definitely be sticking around to see where this goes.

And one small thing:

Sonic and Silver, the three of us should follow the larger branch on the right -- it's most likely Shadow went down that way.

I feel that "more likely" would fit there better.

Going the way of the comics huh? This story will be interesting. A fantastic job done so far.

Nice story. I really like it, can't wait for more.

Hey man what is the next chapter will be coming. :rainbowderp::rainbowhuh::rainbowwild::trixieshiftright::twilightblush::twilightsheepish::twistnerd::trollestia::yay::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::applejackunsure:

So, is this story on hiatus or just flat-out dead?

8089497 Ah. Alright then, just wanted to know if I should bother faving it or not. Danke schön.

Waiiiiiiiiit just a gosh darn minute. The...ACORN army?!
............................................................................Is this actually going to feature stuff from the comics, of is it just that?

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