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A spell miscast and a princess lost to the megaverse, Luna must survive and find the portal home from a world ravaged by rifts and covered in various life forms. Most harmful, the rest indifferent; only a couple might help her return home.
Crossover with Rifts RPG by Palladium.
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One thing that I like about the way your write characters Mocha is that you somehow manage to make all of you characters more down to earth and relatable to normal people even with an imperious personalty like Princess Luna. So far the story is interesting Luna is nerfed a little both both voluntary and inventively, sense she can't take out her signature armor with risking attracting underhanded extra dimensional attention on to herself. It is also that Luna has to earn the respect of her foalnapers/ "sisters" at arms, both imposing herself in the group and submitting herself to it. The crew in interesting to me so far, as they all have their little quirks to them but still manage to function as a unit. I think the lack of attention to the story so far is due to the fact that it isn't a typical tendency see a story where Luna is displaced and the Rifts game is probably somewhat obscure to most readers. I think it would help if it was placed in more crossover groups or RGP related groups to get more attention to it. I hope to see more of this story soon, it is surprisingly good to read.
7754196 It's a common thing to share titles, as long as they aren't the same story or too similar.
Blink is a great example of ttyl same titled stories that came out within a couple months and were both featured, but were different stories.
7754250 is there a link?
7754256 Wow, thanks! I'll check it out.
Read on, friend!
A slight correction, "thy" and "thine" are possessive (ie. "your"), "thou" and "thee" are nominative ("you"). So in the above instance it should be "thou" (also, I think that "hath" should instead be "hast" when paired with "thou", but I'm not 100% certain on that one). Early Modern English is fun!
7759371 I know, RIGHT!
Thou art correct, me thinks.
I think there was a slight mix-up in characters in these two paragraphs.
Heh I'm so pleasantly surprised to stumble on a n actual rifts crossover... only searched for it on a whim. will definitely have to finish reading this later
on a side note looks like you forgot to close out the bolding on one of Luna's lines since the chapter is nearly all bold. a quick formatting fix when you get the chance.
8207308
Derp.
My bad, great catch. I'm actually working with someone on making this story better before I continue it, but I'll get there soon!