Lyra was having a good day. Then she stole a caramel drop, and her day became a lot hotter.
Brighter.
On-fire-y.
Probably shouldn't have stolen that candy.
Lyra was having a good day. Then she stole a caramel drop, and her day became a lot hotter.
Brighter.
On-fire-y.
Probably shouldn't have stolen that candy.
Lyra: I Steal candy
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HAHA, that's a good one
This is golden! well done!
Owch lol.
Cute story
This was a nice, little story, with the cinnamon part resembling a mix of horror and comedy—something I have never seen done before, but it worked well. Your grammar and spelling are very good as well The only thing I could really complain about is that the “epic” war ending seemed a little weak to me. It was over pretty fast, with no space to develop either the friendly atmosphere or to keep the feeling of Lyra at war. Still, if this was your first story, it’s pretty good.