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Rarity as carry a secret about herself for all her life, a secret that only her parents know of. But after a fated meeting at a wedding in Canterlot, Rarity finds out a lot more about herself, then she ever could imagine.

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Well, I've seen it done with Twilight. I've seen it done with Applejack. I've seen it done with Celestia.

Might as well stick around and see it done with Rarity.

Very interesting!
I hope this fic wont be like ''daughter kills mother for the greater good''i got sick of those.

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And Dash, and Pinkie.... and flutt.... ya know what.... with this, that makes all main 6... and Soarin... hell, in one of the sorin fics, that was the end reveal, that rainbow was too...

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Rarity was Changeling in the story "Three Sisters"

seems interesting, but the release date marked has me concerned.

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Heck, I remember seeing one fic once that had everybody in Equestria as secretly a changeling...except for, I think, Celestia. :rainbowlaugh:

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:pinkiegasp: How did Celestia react?! :pinkiehappy:"Oh yeah, by the way... Your the only pony left and we have been feeding on you" :trollestia: This is a joke? :pinkiecrazy: NOPE!... (Celestia fainted) "Celestia is unable to battle, Chrysalis wins!..." :facehoof: THAT SOUNDS LIKE A HORRIR FIC! :rainbowlaugh: HAHAHAHA...

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It probably just sat there unposted while they figured out the rest of the story. I have like... 5 that are like that... at least they finnaly posted. Most of my thing will probably not see the light of Celestia... I mean, day...

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Oh yeah... I forgot... where did i put that... its here in my favorites somewhere... there are so many I tag...

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do you have a history of where Princess Luna was Changeling?
I would read that.

Tracking...for now.

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I actually tried to find the fic just now so to provide a link, but sadly no dice, and I don't seem to have it in my faves, so...

If anybody else knows of the fic I'm talking about and can provide a link to it, please do. Sadly, I don't recall its exact title anymore. :fluttershysad:

But anyway, it was actually a comedy--the author's way of acknowledging all of the "x is a changeling" fics that were all the rage at the time and taking the idea to the most logical/humorous conclusion. From what I remember (been a little bit), Celestia was mostly just confused that apparently she had been ruling unaware over a whole nation of nothing but changelings this whole time...and became even more so after Luna was revealed to be a changeling too. :rainbowlaugh:

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Don't worry about that much, this is my first story, that date is when I first try to upload it, I waited like a week and it wasn't approve, so I remove and didn't decide to try again until now, I'm to try to keep up with the updates, now that I see that I got some people interested in this story. Hopefully I can come up with a nice update schedule, it all depends on my writing mood.

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Thats how I feel about the fic where Celestia and Chrysalis get trapped in Silent Hill. Last I saw it, Celestia was injured and unconscious and Chrysalis went out to figure out what was going on. I can't find it.

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This, you mean?

EThe Mare who was Thursday
A changeling infiltrates Celestia's private Council and tries to topple the Equestrian government from within.
GMSeskii · 14k words  ·  62  3 · 1.3k views

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Nope. It was a straight up comedy fic (in fact, it might've had a random tag too) and a oneshot, and well-predated the introduction of Ocellus, or Thorax and the changeling reformation for that matter. Might even predate Starlight Glimmer, for that matter, but not 100% on that.

I want to say the fic was posted on the site some time around 2013 to 2014, but I have no clue at present if I'm remembering that correctly. It's word count couldn't have been much greater than 5,000 words, tops, and that's probably a high estimate on my part.

It had cover art, but I don't recall it clearly enough to give many details, other than it had a lot of green and an overall changeling theme. I'd probably recognize it if I saw it, though.

As already noted, at the time it was posted, "x is a changeling" fics were extremely common, so much so there was usually at least one that was trending on the site or close to it most days. The fic was sort of poking fun at that trend.

It was probably rated everyone, as I can't recall any details that might merit any higher ratings, but at the same time, I can't rule out a teen rating either.

It was also a popular fic at the time it was posted, though it's been long enough now that it's probably since been forgotten by many.

I'd thought it was titled something along the lines of "everyone is a changeling" but apparently not, as that didn't pull up the right fic when I searched for it, and using any part of that as key words didn't turn it up either.

Other than the plot details I already gave, that's really all I can recall of the fic off hand. I would need to re-read it to recall more, but first I'd have to find it.

Aside from some grammar mistakes, this is great. I'll be following and look forward to more.

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Found it! :raritystarry:

EChangelings, Changelings, Everywhere
Even the scenery is changelings.
Benman · 3.5k words  ·  1,929  30 · 35k views

So I was a little fuzzier on some of the details I was talking about earlier than I'd thought, but still close enough. :rainbowlaugh:

This story desperately needs for a native English speaker to edit it. The jokes may work without all of the incorrect verb conjugations and misplaced adverbs.

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then this story isn't for you buddy.

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Coherent writing is not an issue of taste. I can't make you care about your own work, so it's all up to you what you do.

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the thing for me is, that it hasn't been done enough. I really want more Rarity is a changeling stories, I've been commission people for a few, always looking for more :)

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i'll agree with you awhole heartedly there, rarity as changeling is my second favorite, right after twilight
the others are all kinda meh, i like the storeies ive read like the irony of applejack or winds of change, but...*Shrugs* i'm not in any hurry to find more, but rarity and twilight, moar please yes

if your looking for some yourself theres the series i linked, it has 2 finished stories and one unfinished story in it
then there is a one shot of a similar idea whos name i forget, it shows a changeling rarity who looks like she had been covered in white paint and it was driping off her for the cover, almost like runing mascera
then theres 'queen rarity' by damaged, which is an EQG story but rarity ends up a pony changeling via transformation magic shinanigans soooo i count it

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It was funny for me untill Celestia broke down. Then it was sad. Then it was funny again, but I can't stop thinking about poor Celestia.

As a result... I had a VERY DUMB thought about an alternate ending where Twilight's suggestion about a third faction forming... kinda comes true. Actually it just becomes one. Why would they follow those 2 morons when they could all follow Celestia. Those 2 took everything from Celestia, i think it would be hilariously ironic if the changelings chose Celestia over them because Celestia is better. Things were good before these 2 showed up, why go to (a very confusing) war when you could just... continue on.

Comment posted by Ali della Morte deleted Dec 14th, 2020

The chapter is good. But you need to work on your spelling and grammar.

Kind of reminds me of a story of one of the main six is a changeling called pinkie bug surprise https://www.fimfiction.net/story/472657/pinkies-bug-surprise by MattTOB

at least this chapter explains some of the words and actions of the cloaked figure from chapter one. Will he appear in the future or did he die somewhere behind the scenes?

Good Bug-mother Chrysalis?
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Yes, I'm going to try to update once or twice a month, it all depends on the mood.

Wow what a turn of event so Hondo and cookie found a changeling egg outside and live with the ponies and whoever that unknown changeling is must got her out because she doesn't want her to be there but later years looks like faith have a different plan for Rarity the Canterlot Wedding she's preparing the dress for Princess Cadence the song that Rarity was humming spark a memory of Princess Cadence and finding out that she is the Lost Princess of the changelings so she dropped the disguise and Queen Chrysalis in front of Rarity feeling overwhelmed She fainted so apparently Queen Chrysalis cancel the attack and get Rarity out of here and surprisingly releasing the real princess cadence so I wonder what they're going to do with Rarity I guess we'll find out next time

"Not having this conversation, period!" Twilight stumps her hoof down, she soon hears Applejack and Rainbow giggling "And what's so funny?"

lol

"Ok, ok, just hear me out, what if there are these creatures that can make themselves look like anypony they want, and there secretly replacing ponies as there preparing for the invasion of Equestria!" Pinkie pie eyes widened as she realize just how deep this rabbit hole when, her friends just look at her with puzzled looks on their faces.

She's not wrong if you think about it

"I don't know Pinkie, maybe your the one acting strange," Rainbow rolls her eyes.

Rainbow dash you do realize you're talking to right its Pinkie Pie sometimes you can't question it I learned that the hard way

While it looks like things really turn an eventful one so rarity is in the hive now and unfortunately she doesn't know where she is or how she going to get back what it looks like she's going to be there for a while. while her friends doesn't know what's happening a changeling named Vixen took the form of Rarity to fool the other ponies until the queen said so and whatever the plan is but anyway Queen Chrysalis does look like she cares for her daughter but I don't know she still something else and I don't trust her and I wonder if thorax and pharynx will make their appearances soon but anyway this is very interesting and I wonder how she's going to live like this guess we'll find out next time

I got a bad feeling about vixen

The only question is well Rarity ever going to see her friends again

Me pregunto que pasará cuando sus amigos sepan sobre su secreto

Fluttershy made her way to the garden to fine the right birds to sing for the wedding, Pinkie when the decorate the hall and prepare the party games, Rainbow found a cloud to take a nap, while Rarity prepare to make the dresses. Rarity had request the princess for a fitting so she could get the her measurement for her dress.

Of course she would, classic Rainbow Dash :rainbowdetermined2:

The plot so far isn't bad, but the narration is awful. Show, don't tell.

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