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Vic Fontaine


Author & Editor; Chief Apprentice in Loyal's House of Fanfic; Lt. in the Army of Biscuit; Does Bad Things for Bad Horse; Runs a Nightclub on Holodeck 2.

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In the brief moment when one guard leaves and a new guard arrives, everything slows down for a few moments. Then things resume again, a new face on the same mission.


*A love letter of sorts to this beautiful series that has done so much for us.
*Big thanks to Pascoite for his editing and pre-reading advice as I worked through one draft after another.

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The feels!!!:raritydespair: The end of the show hit me very hard. I sincerely hope that the stories NEVER end!

Also, shades of "The Langoliers!"

FUCK YOU to every self insert ever made, and to whatever lazy writer first came up with the idea. Ruined a perfectly good story too.

Though it was 100% obvious where this was going the moment pony amnesia came up.

Fuck you. Oh God fuck you so much. You hit me right where I fucking live mate.

Do you know you're all my very best friends?

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First, the salty language really wasn't necessary.

Second: As I said in my author note, I'm no big fan of self-inserts either. But this story is admittedly self-indulgent. It's my way to write out how I felt after the finale. So I allowed myself a one time cameo.

I'm sorry if that ruined the story for you, but thanks for giving it a try.

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It's my opinion on my self inserts (top 5 worst story inventions of all time for me). I read the note at the end. It explained why.

But the story was broken by that point anyway. I finished it at least.

I didn't like it but more because I am avoiding expressing how I feel about the finale, denial that it ended. Especially just because Hasbro wanted to make room for New hopefully money making g5. I know that eventually I'll process the end, but until then, it just hits to close to home. Writing was actually decent tho, again I didn't like it not because of quality but because Iam not ready to handle mlp ending

If ever there were a good reason to make a self-insert, this is it. Beautiful love letter to the cartoon horse program that brought us all together. Thank you for it.

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