Life in the Wonderbolts is unique, to put it one way. But life starts getting even more interesting when Celestia herself offers to teach Spitfire a deadly new stunt. It won't be easy for the captain and her pegasus team to learn the alicorn trick. Patience and determination are a must but friendship may be the most important thing for Spitfire to get through the training. If only the Wonderbolts can hold together long enough...
IMPORTANT: This fimfic was started after Season 2 but before Season 3. It may NOT adhere to the canon from new seasons.
Art by BlackWater (me)
Chapters (43)
Great first chater, I will be keeping an eye out for updates on this!
Heck yeah!
Nice, can't wait to see how she does!
@Samrules350 + RealCrazy: Thank you!
Just realized chapter two has only two words less than chapter one. What are the odds?! Tempted to edit... XD
Interesting idea, be interesting to see where this will go... and I may have to add this to my group
"She had a breakdown. A complete breakdown. What does that say about my leadership? I've been blowing it."
While I really don't want to rub salt in her emotional wounds Celestia could have responded this way: "My sister went stark craving bonkers and tried to plunge Equestria in eternal night."
Wait... the Royal Post, the Post Office is only for member of the Court?
@Celestia's Paladin: Good point. Actually, now that I think about it, quite a few ponies have gone loopy between Season 1 and 2. I guess the crazy factor is dormant (or active) within us all. xD
Regarding the Post...The Royal Post is not a name for the normal post office or post service. Details in next chapter or two.
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Remember what Twilight says, "Everypony in town is crazy", course I think Celestia has bit of an excuse, being alive as long as she has is bound to make anypony nutbars, though she is mellow about it.
I retract my previous statement about the EPS, I stand corrected.
Nice. I am very much enjoying this story. I never really took the time to think about the personalities of the Wonderbolts, and you write them amazingly well, I must say. Keep up the good work!
@Man Of War: Thank you very much! I do try to keep everything in good order throughout the story. I certainly hope that future chapters are enjoyable as well.
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Well, this one certainly was. I just have a quick question, from what point of view is everything taking place? For most of it it's the normal 3rd person, but in a few spots it switches to 3rd omniscient. But anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.
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I really need to watch my Twiiter habit and use the proper reply features. xD
When I started writing this fic, I had it planned for 3rd person. However, I didn't have any more detailed perspectives in mind so I don't really recognize when I go into omniscient and back. It's not meant to be like a narrative from a third-person pony so think of the whole think as generic 3rd or part-time omnicient. Or you can think of the story being told by an omniscient Derpy.
Wait...that's an awesome fic idea. lol
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Ah, I see, and oh boy, a story told entirely by Derpy, that does sound interesting.
Very nice chapter.
I only saw one or two things,
I keep reading this in my mind and if she was panicked then she probably wouldn't have chuckled about such a horrifying though as looking like a giant mutant tomato, and there was just one or two spelling things but I can't quite remember where they are, but other than that you are doing great, I'm really liking this story. Keep it up!
Ah, some conspiracy thrown in now, nice. I will be waiting for more.
Another good chapter, only thing I saw was here,
I think it is suppose to be pegasi instead of pegasus. Other than that good chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Oh, bit of a love thing now. Pretty good, looking forward to more!
OMG they should just fuc*k and get it over with (JK)
Oh hey. This updated. Sweet!
~Skeeter The Lurker
"COLD!" Hilarious ending. Also a great story.
Very nice story indeed.
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Thank you! It's over halfway done but I hope you continue to enjoy it.
ill be keeping an eye on this one :) Not a Bolts fan, but i liked the of Trollestia taking another student...
Wonder what Twilight would say if she found about Tia's new student
Oh fuck.
~Skeeter The Lurker
This is THE BEST wonderbolt story I have had the pleasure to read.
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Personally I wish all stories were as well written as this.
I just loved this story
Thank you
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Well you're very welcome. And thank you.
Best 'Bolt story I have read so far, although to be honest, it is the only one I have read that didn't have Rainbow Dash as a main character. I wouldn't mind a sequel to this.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
This is so looking like a lead up to a surprise spitfire ship. Though from a few chapters back 'it took longer than expected to get to the Canon training, it was surprise that was holding things up' (not the exact wording but the idea) no SURPRISE there lol. Had to say it.
75% Chance? 'Certainty of death, slim chance of success, what are we waiting for? ' -Gimli son of gloin.
We shall see won't we?
Not bad, a comical ending to a glorious and tragic story. Though the one thing I would have liked to know is what is Surprise going to do now? What happens between Soarin and Spitfire? Does Rainbow every join the bullet group? Great topics to cover if you ever do a sequel. Other than that great story.
I've read this story over and over again. This is by far my favourite story on this site. Thank you so much for writing this.