• Member Since 28th Feb, 2015
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Haloboy11721


Nothing to see here citizen, move along.

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Staying up past his bedtime, the one and only Human is expecting a visitor to pick up some 'goods' from him.

Little does he know or even expect that his visitor would be non-other than Princess Celestia!

But is she genuinely there to pick up the 'goods'? Or is she there for alternative motives?

Only time may tell...



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Besides that one request, feel free to comment to your heart's content.

The Profanity Tag is used not because any characters swear, but because one or more words that can be considered triggering are used... You have been warned.

Enjoy the story.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

Celestia, with her infinite kindness and even more so patients, waited for me to close my mouth, rather than make fun of how I could catch a fly like that.

i quite liked reading that i think you have some potential for writing and also patients is spelled wrong it is patience.

again i loved the story! :)

[PS i said this in the comments since this is not the only thing i wanted to say.]

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Sorry for getting back to you so late, I'm just mega lazy, Anyway... I saw this a while back, but am only getting back to replying now, just wanted to say, thank you for being the first person to A: Comment. and B: Fix my mistake(s). So thank you, Maybe next time when writing I'll have more "patience" Rather than "patients"

Have a good one, and again, thank you.

Cheers!

Wow... this is a little dark.

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Just wait for the sequel. (That I'm too lazy to finish.) It'll be far worse. Intrigue and such, along with, umm, well. I think you know the rest based on this story. (Cough Cough, Rape, Cough Cough.)

Honestly, I'll admit that this story is (vaguely) based on the Tarnished Silver series that I, Sadly, haven't read all of the chapters yet.

THIS STORY IS NOT IN THE SAME UNIVERSE OR ANYTHING LIKE THAT, I just liked the idea of ponies in a kind of sex cult kidnapping foals, and decided to use that.

Anyway, sorry for the late reply, have a good one and whatnot.

Cheers!

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