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Many folks wondered, where were The Great And Powerful Trixie and Starlight Glimmer during the events of My Little Pony: The Movie? They seemed to get no mention at all! What were they doing?

While Twilight Sparkle and her friends were busy saving the world from the Storm King, Trixie and Starlight Glimmer were defending the home front of Equestria using guerilla tactics, magic tricks, and downright theatrical performances to save innocent townsfolk! But when things go wrong and it seems like all hope is lost, will Starlight Glimmer be able to express her true feelings before it's too late?

Written for the StarTrixMaud shipping contest by Bicyclette! https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/957718/startrixmaud-shipping-contest-24-july-31-august-2021
Winner of Seventh Place and the Judge's Prize, The Tempest In a Teacup Prize!

With my Judge’s Prize, one of the big things I was looking for was a properly chaotic Trixie. She’s a treat (and amazingly useful story-wise) when she’s at her wildest. A number of stories satisfied that, but this one stepped forward and also hit one of my other favorite things: I love stuff that happened ‘off-screen’ during other major show events. I could go on for a while about the bits I enjoyed – the finale is great for using an established deus ex machina well; it brings in some of the Equestrian allies who were weirdly absent for the Movie proper and does so in a way that helps the situation make sense; both Starlight and Trixie are adorable. But to be totally honest, I was sold on this one the moment Trixie declared “If the power of friendship will not defeat you, perhaps the Power of Incredible Violence will!” I’m a total sucker for lines like that.

--TCC56

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Comments ( 8 )

A revolution against invaders without declarations of love and kissing is a revolution not worth having. :)

Congratulations on being the very first entry to the StarTrixMaud Shipping Contest! I've added this to the contest folder as well.

hello! you should have already been PMed about this, but this comment is just to record that this fic has won The Tempest in a Teacup Prize in the StarTrixMaud Shipping Contest!

As he whipped his head around to look toward the alleyway, the lieutenant caught sight of the two ponies galloping into the town square, ripping off their fashionably-tiny hats to reveal unicorn horns.

aww! such a cute and fun mental image

“For you were not prepared for the Astounding Teamwork of the Great And Powerful Trrrrrrrrrrixie, and her Magnificent Best Friend, Starlight Glimmer

of course Trixie introduces them that way!

“We are lucky to have both of you working to save Equestria.” Chief Thunderhooves nodded to the pair, and turned away to return to his herd, now bolstered with an entire town full of ponies.

ooh, really like this use of the buffalo who were never seen again after that one slightly unfortunate episode! but there's a lot of juicy Thematic here that i love, feels very alternate history if that makes sense

“Yeah, I’ll - I’ll sleep with the - the Great and - her wagon too.” Starlight Glimmer stumbled over herself a little, and rapidly trotted after Trixie, her face burning.

classic Freudian slip, love it!

“Good night, Trixie.” Starlight Glimmer sighed.

aww, poor Glimmy!

(“... And because we need to rescue the ponies, of course,” Starlight Glimmer had added hastily.)

this is a nice touch, Starlight's old sociopathic self shining through, but on the side of good of course!

“True Love can never be a mere gambit, Starlight Glimmer!” Trixie intoned dramatically, tossing her mane despite the chains.

love that this would be Trixie's interpretation of Starlight's confession, her inner showmare can't help but take over

Something warm was burning inside of Starlight Glimmer, the same warmth she felt on her face whenever Trixie praised her, or shot her one of those special glances, the one that made her feel like they shared a secret.

oof, love this! really making me nostalgic for those feelings, sigh. great stuff

As she took her turn to capture Trixie’s bottom lip between her own, she felt their horns connect, and this time she was fully aware of the magical shockwave that exploded from their connected bodies.

and of course, a gay kiss leading to the literal generation and application of magical energy, just wonderful! StarTrix is too powerful

“Trrrrrrrixie!” Starlight Glimmer sang out the last word, laughing as Trixie bowled her over, smothering her with kisses. “If you’re not careful, we might make that big magic again and level the mountain!”

i must admit, that would be a concern of mine!


an interesting melding of genres, warfic and the fluffiest of romances! of course, the missing part of what Trixie and Starlight Glimmer were doing during the movie was the perfect spot for a story just like this. and awkward Starlight x oblivious Trixie is itself an absolute classic. thank you for writing!

CH1: “We are The Great and Powerful Trixie, and her Magnificent Best Friend Starlight Glimmer!” A beat. “In case you missed our introduction before.”

“But, uh, just Trixie and Starlight is fine!” Starlight Glimmer added quickly, offering them a comforting smile.

CH2: “Yeah! Don’t split us up!!” she agreed, although her voice wasn’t twisted with the same heartbreak that Starlight’s was.

Good characterization juxtaposition!

CH1: “Do you think we’ll be able to do this without Twilight Sparkle?”
...
Trixie sighed deeply,

I'm surprised though that Trixie didn't show more disgust for Twilight, even if she realizes they probably need her.

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