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6-D Pegasus


Me or my OC?

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Rainbow Dash is uncertain how she'll balance her life as the newly promoted Captain of the Wonderbolts. The former captain has a few words to say.


Written as an entry into the 2024 Wonderbolts Site Contest.

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Comments ( 17 )

I peeked. 👀

pneu #3 · 2 weeks ago · · ·

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How could you. :pinkiesad2:

I peeked. 👀

O...okay? What?


Very good story you got there, 6-D. I like it.

My only issue is that "Sleet Shower" and "Spitfire" don't really sound too similar, in my opinion.

That was a really nice read. Wholesome and emotional. Keep up the good work :rainbowdetermined2:

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Awww thank youuu <33


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I can seeeee that, but imagine their supervisor calling out their name from far away, over the sound of wind, while both are tired from cloud busting :3 maybee

Someday, you will use em dashes instead of en dashes.

Loved the fic, Sixdee. :twilightsmile:

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Ok, I see what you mean. I guess there's more of a similarity of the consonant sounds in their names than the vowels.

Good fic with a good message. Dope work, homie. 🙌🏽

Wholesome fic with a good message. I feel like a lot of things people seek advice for often turns out this way; simply a fact of the way things are.

We always expect actionable advice, we want to believe there's some process to follow, some way to exude control over something we're concerned about, but ultimately all we really need is to have realized the facts of a situation.

What should be, what you want it to be, will be - because you want it to be.

Feels like rainbow hearing her own advice when she most needs it.

Very good, I'm glad you convinced me to read it :raritywink:

An excellent message; one that, perhaps, a good number of us needed to hear.

A lovely little peek into their lives down the road. Very well done.

Yet another amazing life fic by 6-D, keep up the outstanding work!

Wonderbolt fics are the best :3

Whoa! Having Spitfire give RD friendship lessons I'm here for that.

"You just do, simple as that. What I mean is, no matter long you stay away from someone you want to keep as a friend, as long as you two find something, anything, that you can always return to to bond over or stay friends over, and you really, really want to keep that friend, as much as they want to keep you, then you'll remain friends til the end. It's as simple as that."

This is very true and some ppl definitely need to hear it, nice story

Me and Sleet knew each other like the back of own wings as weather ponies

word missing.
otherwise good.

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