When Sora enters a new land, he finds it pure and unspoiled. However he can sense a darkness which soon threatens to plunge Equestria into darkness and he realizes that the darkness has been here far longer then he thought...
Long story short, this is my second time writing fanfiction and since the last one was terrible I'm trying to make this readable. Also feel free to brush up on any incorrect KH knowledge.
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Sora, what have you done?
Well, looks pretty good so far. missing one or two . but does okay.
1886898 Missing one or two?
1886978 Periods. I got lazy.
1886994 Periods?
1887001 THE DOTS.
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If your a writer, you know what a period is.
1887008 I knew that!
1887012 Oh sure you did.
wow, just met and already we're arguing.
1887017 I'm british, I have an excuse
1887020 thats like saying you have an excuse to stuff cookies into your brothers playstation 2 because your 6.
Big fan of Kingdom Hearts and i'm loving the story
And I better see some Gooby in this story
1887081 We use the word full stop not period
Shouldn't that be 'Somepony'?
Seeing as that is what he heard AJ say.
But other than that, you have my attention.
1887236 Fixed, thanks!
Meh kinda lost me on the sora turned into a pony part...
But I guess it still has potential for a good story!
-Kiryu
1887401 What do you mean?
1887415
Well when it comes to crossover stories...
I get annoyed when the a character turns into a pony
Some stories I do let it slide cause well..
the story really intrigues me but i have limits, I mean please the hero getting turned into pony's thing is really cliche (for me)
But some people actually enjoy it so hey if they like it well they like it, dont get me wrong your story is good
but I just dont find it intriguing
-Kiryu
1887463 What does Sora do when he enters a new land? He changes his form, like when he's turned into a lion in pride lands.
No one ever explains that in the game. I am going to attempt to make Twilight explain it as I never got it either. Don't judge by first chapter.
This is a way too uncommon crossover. The text feels a little compressed, maybe increase the distance between lines? Otherwise decent, liked and faved.
1887523 Yeah it is! Time to solve that
And yeah I probably should do that, Thanks!
It's awesome! I hope for more !
1887535 No worries mate! Have a moustache.
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1887547 Make a roxas one then
But in all seriousness do it it will be awesome to compare. Thanks!
1887503
Yeah yeah but sadly the damage has been done
Eitherway good luck
-Kiryu
Where are Donald and Goofy?
1888286 Dead. In other words I don't like them, Soras too good for them. They won't be in the fic unless loads of people want them to be
1888311
Awww Come now... they help made KH with Sora (along with Riku and Kairi)
1888317 I know, I know, It's just I can't stand them. They will be mentioned though. If it makes you any happier I'll probably use mickey
1888335
Nah, but you can use Riku or Roxas or Ven
1888343 Roxas will definently be making an appearence i'm 100000000% sure
We going to be seeing any romance? Maybe something between Sora and Twilight?
The one thing about the games that iritated me to no end, was that they NEVER mentioned Wakka ever again. I like to think that while Tidus got thrown to Traverse Town, Selphie and Wakka got thrown somewhere else, hopefully together. Who knows? Maybe if they got thrown into Equestria, Wakka would be an Athlete and Selphie would be a Performer....
Ok, I hate making requests, but if you see a chance, mention them at least? That would make my day.
I know almost all things kingdom hearts so if you ever need some explainations for certain things like how Sora and the gang turned into animals. Imagine if they entered Pride Land as their original forms, what would the lions think of? "A human? Easy prey," 'No. 1 target,' anywhere along those lines. When they visit Atlantis, Donald uses his magic to transform them into creatures that are capable of adapting to the water. Since Donald is not going to be part of the story (as you stated earlier) it could be that the atmosphere of the world could be the cause of the change in Sora's form.
I just think people need to have an active imagination as to how some humans can be transformed into ponies, but I digress. These are fanfics, everypony can have fun with their own logic. If it makes sense to you, try to make others see how you piece them together.
1890902 To help explain the whole changing into a pony thing, I'm going to use a certain stallion in a box
1888761 Maybe but I can't guarantee much. There will be Roxas X Namine later though don't ask how they get in the story I hardly know either XD
1890308 I don't think I can do that, I know nothing about Wakka or anyone else who was on destiny islands. They should of all landed in traverse town though
If you have a way to explain it, then that is good. Can't wait to read it then, because this first chapter is a good start.
If you need help with KH, I can help.
1887503 1890902 Actually I can explain the transformation, when sora and co. got new clothes from the fairies at the beginning of kingdom hearts II they explained that the clothes would adapt to the worlds as well as evolving to improve his powers. (the clothes are also what allowed him to Dual-Wield in KH II) (BTW I'm an editor and advisor, I'd be perfectly happy to work with you on these! (I'm also the ultimate person to talk Kingdom Hearts with, I'm like the number one fan.) Send me a message if you want my assistance.)
HAHAHAH that is amazing he froze them!
That is amazing,Can't wait for another chapter!
Give me more chapters to read. The suspense is killing me.
It's been eight days.
EIGHT. DAYS.
C'mon, bro, everything seems to be on hiatus.
Sora turned them into lizards, didn't he.
Ok bro, This story is good, and you have been on hiatus for quite a while. Now I have one thing to say, MMMMMOOOOOAAAAARRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok this is good id like donald and goofy to be here but quite honestly youre good without them and you don't have to say that their dead you just can say that this is sora's first adventure without them! but as every one els says i need MMOOORREEEEEE!!!!!!! im am completley hooked we need more good kingdom hearts stuff
run for the hills sora
come on already!
You still need a knowledgeable pony on Kingdom Hearts and proof-reading. I can gladly offer you my assistance^^
LOL LOVE IT
hope to read more soon
Its been almost one year since you updated more please
excellent